When Warm Winds Blow
strange things happen...15 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Well, there has to be more coming. This is a very captivating story that wouldn't let me go once I started reading. Who's doing the whistling? There's no one stirring anywhere. Eerie!!!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Well, there has to be more coming. This is a very captivating story that wouldn't let me go once I started reading. Who's doing the whistling? There's no one stirring anywhere. Eerie!!!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Eerie. nice. Mission accomplished. lol Many thanks Yvonne. G
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do believe this is a signal of things to begin. I surely hope you will continue this story. I can see a lot of action and interesting situations for a novel. Thank you for sharing. I really liked this.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I do believe this is a signal of things to begin. I surely hope you will continue this story. I can see a lot of action and interesting situations for a novel. Thank you for sharing. I really liked this.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Many thanks, barbara. I actually wrote this way back in 2015 and have been tinkering with it a bit. I have a lot of stuff that I started in my first year of writing that I put away until I learnt to write a bit better. lol Much appreciated. G
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very intriguing and surely isn't the end. Something has to happen to explain the wolf and the storm. I look forward to seeing what you are going to do with this beginning.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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This is very intriguing and surely isn't the end. Something has to happen to explain the wolf and the storm. I look forward to seeing what you are going to do with this beginning.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Many thanks, Carol. G
Comment from royowen
I think you've succeeded in raising the hackles on the back of my neck, and there was just enough suggestion of a night creature, but likewise the element of normality to this post G, I enjoyed it so much. For some reason I thought of the film "A hot August night", well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Even though(t) the sun had long gone... 2: As it (the) warn off...to?
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I think you've succeeded in raising the hackles on the back of my neck, and there was just enough suggestion of a night creature, but likewise the element of normality to this post G, I enjoyed it so much. For some reason I thought of the film "A hot August night", well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Even though(t) the sun had long gone... 2: As it (the) warn off...to?
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Much appreciated, Roy. especially for the catches. G
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Well done
Comment from jessizero
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. You have excellent descriptions. It made me curious about the wolf, but I suppose that's what you intended. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. You have excellent descriptions. It made me curious about the wolf, but I suppose that's what you intended. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Many thanks for the great response to this piece, Jessi. G
