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Hope

Haiku 5/7/5

43 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Hope, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, suggests that we find our reasons to expect great things and then advance in exploration for the proof. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
    You are right, Bill. We need to find our reasons for great expectations and then search for proof. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
    I am glad you liked my Haiku.
    Jesse

Comment from Sanku
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This is so true ,so true .We all live by hope .Can;'t think of a time when here is no hope. a well written Haiku and you have conveyed a lot of meaning via 3 short lines.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
    Thanks for your insightful review.
    Your kindness is well appreciated.
    Glad you agree and see a lot of meaning in my Haiku.
    Jesse
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Keep that hope rising, Jesse!
"Universal love" may never become a reality, but there is always hope...
A beautiful and moving sentiment writting in classic Haiku format.
And we both know how your words are meaningful and resonate with both of us!

Counting the days!
I'm with you!

Take Care!
diane

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
    Hello Diane!
    I can always hope, can't I?
    Universal love is just a moment away!
    Thanks for your support. Yes, I am counting the days.
    Have a wonderful week!
    Jesse