Hope
Haiku 5/7/543 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
What a great and meaningful entry for this contest! The first two lines
say a lot to me. I like how this author wrote the second line using the word rises! The last line unites us all! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem! Jesse, hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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What a great and meaningful entry for this contest! The first two lines
say a lot to me. I like how this author wrote the second line using the word rises! The last line unites us all! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem! Jesse, hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Maria, for your enthusiastic review!
Thank you for your kindness and for wishing me a great day!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Jesse
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But that doesn't keep me from enjoying reading others thoughts. I can't remember the exact date of your surgery, but here's hoping everything works out better than even expected. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But that doesn't keep me from enjoying reading others thoughts. I can't remember the exact date of your surgery, but here's hoping everything works out better than even expected. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My surgery date is September 1st. Thanks for your thoughtful review. Better than expected is a wonderful thought, and I hope you are right!
Thanks for your good wishes!
Jesse
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I knew your surgery was coming up soon. You were out of sight, but not out of mind. Wish you the very best! Ric
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Thanks, Ric, I appreciate it!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I get the message and yet am troubled with line two a tad. I would like it better as "rising up to explore, but "then" that is short a syllable. The difference being to me seems as THEN has hope pausing before ascending whereas hope ascends naturally on its own. Do you see what I am saying? Your friend in words. Tom
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I get the message and yet am troubled with line two a tad. I would like it better as "rising up to explore, but "then" that is short a syllable. The difference being to me seems as THEN has hope pausing before ascending whereas hope ascends naturally on its own. Do you see what I am saying? Your friend in words. Tom
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Without hope we would all be doomed Jesse and I am glad you championed hope here in your Haiku, I wish you luck with the contest, your words are uplifting, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Without hope we would all be doomed Jesse and I am glad you championed hope here in your Haiku, I wish you luck with the contest, your words are uplifting, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Dolly, for your thoughtful review.
I try to be uplifting in all my pieces.
Thank you for your good wishes, and have a wonderful weekend!
Jesse
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You too Jesse x x x
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a very nice poem. Your count is correct for a Haiku. The artwork goes well with your poem. I really liked the phrase "universal love". I wish you the best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
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This is a very nice poem. Your count is correct for a Haiku. The artwork goes well with your poem. I really liked the phrase "universal love". I wish you the best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Jesse, with your contest entry. I enjoyed
reading it. Your syllable count is correct per line. Great job with
haiku style. The picture is awesome. I like the satori. Yes, hope
is one of the universal 'things'.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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You did a great job, Jesse, with your contest entry. I enjoyed
reading it. Your syllable count is correct per line. Great job with
haiku style. The picture is awesome. I like the satori. Yes, hope
is one of the universal 'things'.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Jan. You have covered all the details of the Haiku poetry contest entry.
I am glad you liked it and enjoyed reading it. Yes, universal love is the best!
Best wishes,
Jesse
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully said, if we could all rise together our strength to conquer all troubles would be a lot easier and love contains an abundance of strength, what a wonderful message in this excellent haiku, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Beautifully said, if we could all rise together our strength to conquer all troubles would be a lot easier and love contains an abundance of strength, what a wonderful message in this excellent haiku, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thanks, my friend. I believe we can conquer all our troubles with the strength to rise to universal love. I am happy you liked the message.
Thank you for your kind words and for wishing me good luck with the contest.
Jesse
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a wonderful example of a haiku that
explores the very essence of what makes it
a unique poetry style.
I tend to shy away from haiku, I am not sure
why. Your writing has inspired me to give it
another try.
The message of love is a strong one that feels
heartfelt. I agree that hope gives us life and life
is love.
Terrific word choices!!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a wonderful example of a haiku that
explores the very essence of what makes it
a unique poetry style.
I tend to shy away from haiku, I am not sure
why. Your writing has inspired me to give it
another try.
The message of love is a strong one that feels
heartfelt. I agree that hope gives us life and life
is love.
Terrific word choices!!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I encourage you to try it, my friend.
I haven't written a haiku in many years yet it just felt right.
Thank you for your kind and insightful review. I am impressed by your insights into the idea that hope gives us life and love.
Have a lovely day and week!
Jesse
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely Haiku. I like the personification of hope, and hope and love often go together. Fine image chosen as well. Best wishes for your entry in the Haiku contest.
Wendy
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A lovely Haiku. I like the personification of hope, and hope and love often go together. Fine image chosen as well. Best wishes for your entry in the Haiku contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done haiku on what is love. I am a big believer that the universe is alive and that is what we perceive when we tap into the universal mind of the universe
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nicely done haiku on what is love. I am a big believer that the universe is alive and that is what we perceive when we tap into the universal mind of the universe
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
