Morning Display
A Contest Entry24 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A wonderful image and an excellent Haiku to accompany it. Your third line is very clever - a great satori line. I'm sure this one will do well! Sending you very best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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A wonderful image and an excellent Haiku to accompany it. Your third line is very clever - a great satori line. I'm sure this one will do well! Sending you very best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I do hate spiders but I do admire their artistic webs. Great photo and a very good descriptive Haiku. Love the final line
Veiled threat on display
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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I do hate spiders but I do admire their artistic webs. Great photo and a very good descriptive Haiku. Love the final line
Veiled threat on display
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your choice for an accompanying picture could not have been better. The glistening droplets and the veiled threat were elegant in their way. I liked that you didn't go cutsie on this. You gave an ominous point but did it with class. Did you understand that? Lol. Anyway, I enjoyed your poem.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Your choice for an accompanying picture could not have been better. The glistening droplets and the veiled threat were elegant in their way. I liked that you didn't go cutsie on this. You gave an ominous point but did it with class. Did you understand that? Lol. Anyway, I enjoyed your poem.
Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Much like life we walk blind until divine intervention occurs like dewdrops" Danger Ahead. Where are the warning signs? In our heads. Listen. The still small voice talks endlessly but we must be in tune with it.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Much like life we walk blind until divine intervention occurs like dewdrops" Danger Ahead. Where are the warning signs? In our heads. Listen. The still small voice talks endlessly but we must be in tune with it.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read.
Comment from Sally Law
This is a wonderful Haiku for the contest, Faith. The cautionary word within is a nice finish. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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This is a wonderful Haiku for the contest, Faith. The cautionary word within is a nice finish. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku read well, Faith. Good job on its style. I
enjoyed reading it. The picture was a perfect complement
to your well-chosen words. I liked the satori.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Your haiku read well, Faith. Good job on its style. I
enjoyed reading it. The picture was a perfect complement
to your well-chosen words. I liked the satori.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice overall presentation background and font choice. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice overall presentation background and font choice. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Your welcome
Comment from leather
You found a dazzling illustration of a spider's web--it is the perfect backdrop for the poem. Despite the beauty of spider webs from a viewing perspective, I have never heard of anyone who enjoys walking into them. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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You found a dazzling illustration of a spider's web--it is the perfect backdrop for the poem. Despite the beauty of spider webs from a viewing perspective, I have never heard of anyone who enjoys walking into them. Best wishes.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I have read a lot of entries for this Haiku Poem Contest, and this one stands out because of the different aspects of nature you bring into play, and the way you hit us successively with the different faces of the spider's web. You highlight how often danger lurks behind a mask of beauty. Kate xx
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I have read a lot of entries for this Haiku Poem Contest, and this one stands out because of the different aspects of nature you bring into play, and the way you hit us successively with the different faces of the spider's web. You highlight how often danger lurks behind a mask of beauty. Kate xx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the last line as this invisible web is now jewelled with pearls and the threat is visible to the world, fine words, an ambient Haiku for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I loved the last line as this invisible web is now jewelled with pearls and the threat is visible to the world, fine words, an ambient Haiku for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Oh, Dolly, thank you so much for your kind words and the six-star rating. I appreciate it very much!