Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your words tragically express the end of texting
while driving. You did a great job, Thomas. Your
words were filled with heart wrenching imagery.
Everyone with a driver's license or who rides in a car
with a phone needs to read this work.
Thanks for sharing, Jan


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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022

Thanks so much!

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is a strong verse with a powerful message that I hope all of your readers will receive.
I know a few people that would benefit from reading this, I will pass on your name.
This is well conceived, realized and presented.
The use of sensory details is superb!
You " word painted" in a way that places the reader in the front seat of the crashed car.
I felt my heart race a little as I read, unfortunately expecting the eminent conclusion.
Thank you for posting.



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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the read.