cornfield in rain
5-7-5 contest entry (raindrops fall as pearls)7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Cornfield in Rain, has the proper formatting and creates this scene of beauty holding on through the onslaught of chilling change.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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This 5-7-5, Cornfield in Rain, has the proper formatting and creates this scene of beauty holding on through the onslaught of chilling change.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Bill
Thanks for your review of this contest entry. The world would prefer the rainfall over the cornfields rather than the Russian reign over Ukraine.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded 5-7-5 poem. The text is large and easy to read. The nature message is clearly stated. Your notes are also informative. The visual fits perfectly. Job well-done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully worded 5-7-5 poem. The text is large and easy to read. The nature message is clearly stated. Your notes are also informative. The visual fits perfectly. Job well-done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your confidence in this contest entry. Pleased with your comments about my overall presentation.
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You are welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I enjoyed this piece. I love your words, accompanied by the artwork. A good rain is always welcome, and you express the drooping corn stalks very nicely! Great job! Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed this piece. I love your words, accompanied by the artwork. A good rain is always welcome, and you express the drooping corn stalks very nicely! Great job! Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thanks John for your vote of confidence for this contest entry. Pleased you liked my imagery.
Comment from poetwatch
The only thing raining down on Ukraine are bombs, author. I wish for war to leave and peace to reign. I know it is wishful thinking, but we can pray so the children can come out and play in the fields. This is a very good offering for the 5-7-5 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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The only thing raining down on Ukraine are bombs, author. I wish for war to leave and peace to reign. I know it is wishful thinking, but we can pray so the children can come out and play in the fields. This is a very good offering for the 5-7-5 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I too wish that peace would reign over Ukraine. Rain(drops) over bombs any day! Thanks for your vote of confidence for this poem.
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a very nicely written haiku. It causes to pause and reflect.
-Well selected words, allowing for visualization.
-Great choice of words for maximum imagery.
Lovely to read.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is a very nicely written haiku. It causes to pause and reflect.
-Well selected words, allowing for visualization.
-Great choice of words for maximum imagery.
Lovely to read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your kind review Mari! Pleased my imagery worked for you.
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Comment from RodG
I think any farmer who has spent months in the fields tending his corn would agree that in Fall, those stalks are "royal beauty." Let's hope that is true this year. Around here the corn crop has been sparse lately. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I think any farmer who has spent months in the fields tending his corn would agree that in Fall, those stalks are "royal beauty." Let's hope that is true this year. Around here the corn crop has been sparse lately. Rod
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Rod, Thanks, as always, for your review of my short poems. I am pleased with your spins on the same.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from evilynne
Very good description of a cornfield in the rain. The picture is a nice compliment to the work. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Very good description of a cornfield in the rain. The picture is a nice compliment to the work. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Evi,
The corn in my area is really sweet to eat. Thanks for your review.
