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Comment from
prettybluebirds
Sometimes one just no longer wishes to live in this world. I have felt that way at times but never acted on it. Life can be overwhelming now and then, as I'm sure you know. Good writing about a sad subject.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
Well I enjoy the song of course the words just seem to naturally go with it?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
PENofFIRE
This poem is beautifully written. Death by suicide is one of the most difficult to accept. You brought your readers into your pain and that is a sign of a great writer. Best wishes for winning the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky1024
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