Sisters
80 Word Flash Fiction2 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, this sounded like typical sister, Jill. I enjoyed reading your
contest entry. The conversation flowed smoothly with good
interaction between the two sisters. I liked the hint about the smile.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Yes, this sounded like typical sister, Jill. I enjoyed reading your
contest entry. The conversation flowed smoothly with good
interaction between the two sisters. I liked the hint about the smile.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you Jan! I appreciate your comments.
Comment from jessizero
This story was so sweet! It sounds like these sisters were up to a lot, and they love each other very much. Thank you for sharing this flash fiction story, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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This story was so sweet! It sounds like these sisters were up to a lot, and they love each other very much. Thank you for sharing this flash fiction story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your comments. I'm glad the sisters' relationship shown through.
