One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
Someone who truly loves us will stand by us in adversity, and keep us safe. If we meet such a person, we can only feel genuine gratitude. We are happy to see when such people give happiness.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Someone who truly loves us will stand by us in adversity, and keep us safe. If we meet such a person, we can only feel genuine gratitude. We are happy to see when such people give happiness.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from dragonpoet
MariVal,
This is a romantic love poem that uses repetition and metaphor well to show the depth of her love. I like how you incorporate the artwork in the poem and the that the font color matches the picture too.
Good luck in then contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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MariVal,
This is a romantic love poem that uses repetition and metaphor well to show the depth of her love. I like how you incorporate the artwork in the poem and the that the font color matches the picture too.
Good luck in then contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Joan,
thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
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Don?t mention it, MariVal.
Where do you find all these quotes abot poerty?
Joan
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I usually Google it after I decide what it's about. I Google poets and art but you can search anything. I found this one I like
https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/tag/poets
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Thanks for the website, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from June Sargent
In your free verse you have succeeded in quietly painting feelings that are often left unsaid. And you followed the pattern and pace of everyday speech. I leaned a lot and enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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In your free verse you have succeeded in quietly painting feelings that are often left unsaid. And you followed the pattern and pace of everyday speech. I leaned a lot and enjoyed it.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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June,
thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from JLR
Gypsy Blue Rose, I regret not have a six - so I am sending a virtual six!
Your free verse, is wonderfully artistic in graphic presentation and artistic in the use of great poetic devices to present to the reader a Love song.
My favorite line is "when tempest turbulence entangles tender hearts"
Good success in the contest, JLR
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Gypsy Blue Rose, I regret not have a six - so I am sending a virtual six!
Your free verse, is wonderfully artistic in graphic presentation and artistic in the use of great poetic devices to present to the reader a Love song.
My favorite line is "when tempest turbulence entangles tender hearts"
Good success in the contest, JLR
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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JLR,
thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very moving love poem in free verse. You nailed it with these profound words and observations on life, love, and lessons learned along the way very powerful a poem,
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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very moving love poem in free verse. You nailed it with these profound words and observations on life, love, and lessons learned along the way very powerful a poem,
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Jake, thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is an excellent poem. Loving arms are portrayed as security , of a soulmate, but also whomever or whatever is steadfast and secure in one's life.
It's a very beautiful poem.
Good luck,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Gypsy,
This is an excellent poem. Loving arms are portrayed as security , of a soulmate, but also whomever or whatever is steadfast and secure in one's life.
It's a very beautiful poem.
Good luck,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Cindy,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You?re welcome, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest, Gypsy. I really appreciated the picture and it was a great, emotional filled free verse poem. I enjoyed the different colors of font you used, it seemed to tie the poem together. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest, Gypsy. I really appreciated the picture and it was a great, emotional filled free verse poem. I enjoyed the different colors of font you used, it seemed to tie the poem together. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Aryr,
Thank you for reviewing all my poems, you are very kind. Blessed be n hugs!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Somebody loves somebody - a lot. When someone can feel as secure as these words tend to imply, that means there is a level of trust and love that is not often reached.
If this is a true, personal account, consider yourself exceedingly fortunate. You have something that many people seek all their lives for.
Really nice verse. Even as an open verse it reads so easily.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Somebody loves somebody - a lot. When someone can feel as secure as these words tend to imply, that means there is a level of trust and love that is not often reached.
If this is a true, personal account, consider yourself exceedingly fortunate. You have something that many people seek all their lives for.
Really nice verse. Even as an open verse it reads so easily.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-You did a good job with the poem and topic.
-Effective imagery and theme of the north star,
along with the repetition of the 't' sound
describing the tempest.
-I also like "dubious winds meander."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-You did a good job with the poem and topic.
-Effective imagery and theme of the north star,
along with the repetition of the 't' sound
describing the tempest.
-I also like "dubious winds meander."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really lovely, Gypsy, and so romantic. The North Star was the perfect metaphor for this poem, it always led you to his arms. What a perfect place to be. Loved this free verse poem, and I loved the presentation. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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That was really lovely, Gypsy, and so romantic. The North Star was the perfect metaphor for this poem, it always led you to his arms. What a perfect place to be. Loved this free verse poem, and I loved the presentation. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis