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Coming Out of My Shell

non-fiction contest entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from Sarah Robin
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What a lovely story! It was beautifully done. It is nice to be with a group that helps and supports each other. I look forward to reading some of your other work.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
    Dear Sarah, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Terry Broxson
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This is a very well-written story for this contest, good luck. I think you leave your readers wanting to know more. You did sing in the choir, Do you still sing? Good job, and thank you for entering the contest. Terry.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Dear Terry, thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. I occasionally sing hymns in Church. I was in the choir for five years, back in the 70s. No longer in a choir. Took singing lessons in the 80s and 2017 - 2018.
Comment from jessizero
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This was a beautiful memory. I am glad you came out of your shell and learned to use your gift. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Dear jessizero, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from LovnPeace
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performed one of His miracles, healing a deaf man with the word "Ephetha." I truly feel as though he was-This brought tears.
I have no six star, but I pray you win the contest with this beautiful story. Blessings, Barbara. xo

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Dear Barbara, thank you for your comments, review and virtual "six."
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Wow. It's good for you. I'm so proud of you. Are you still singing? I can sing, too and have a good voice but I have never come out like you. At age 61, I still have my chance if I try to join a choir.

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Dear Jasmine Girl, thank you for your comments and review, and I am still singing. I plan to record a song, "I'll Walk With God" and have it played at my funeral. I am 66.