Symbiotic Relationship
Can't we all just get along?4 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Troso
I really love this haiku! It's fun, it's playful, yet it still makes you think. I also adore the image you selected for this poem, might I add. This is a really funny, cute, and witty poem!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I really love this haiku! It's fun, it's playful, yet it still makes you think. I also adore the image you selected for this poem, might I add. This is a really funny, cute, and witty poem!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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I could not appreciate your kind words and thoughtful, encouraging review more. Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nice but what if line two read instead, keeping with the needed seven syllables, "who's not afraid of a cat". Same idea. idk if it's better but to me it flows easier.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Very nice but what if line two read instead, keeping with the needed seven syllables, "who's not afraid of a cat". Same idea. idk if it's better but to me it flows easier.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Right.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I would like to know where did they come up with naming the mouse?
When I first heard of the mouse, it sounded so strange to me. Now that the years have passed, it is no stranger to me. I like the picture. And the message. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I would like to know where did they come up with naming the mouse?
When I first heard of the mouse, it sounded so strange to me. Now that the years have passed, it is no stranger to me. I like the picture. And the message. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Well, with the round body, angled at one and the long skinny wire at the other end [before the wireless days...], it does sort of resemble the little rodent. It's definitely the only kind of mouse I'D ever handle!!
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True.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the witty animal contest.
Some mice are bigger problems than others.
All's good until the computer crashes.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the witty animal contest.
Some mice are bigger problems than others.
All's good until the computer crashes.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Good point!! But, at least with computer mice, if you have two, it stays at that number until you deliberately change it.
