Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I'm so sorry about your loss. It happens when you live long enough. It looks like you are 81, twenty years after 61. Please stay alive and post writing here at Fanstory.

Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022

I am an older writer here on Fanstory story but not that old!
Yes, and I'll be 68 in October.
Thanks Jasmine.
Ricky

reply by Jasmine Girl on 18-Aug-2022

You are a young writer then. Jaybird is 97 while many are in their 80's like Lancelot, Jay Squire, Judyverse Lisa May and so on.

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

This is an effective set of moments pulsed at us as you work your way towards the inevitable event that dominated all others and turned happiness to Tragedy. You do this so well.

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022

The reason I wrote this is I've been having an awful lot of Dreams lately.
Two two of them are about my mother but they would be more closer to nightmares because of that relationship!
Thanks again Michael,
Doctor Ricky