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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Summoned"A demon requires fiscal advice
3 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
I just love your tales of demons and humans. I liked their meeting, with both of them screaming. I could see it all, you describe it so well. Funny! Lol! So how they communicate is a good part of the fun. I look forward to the entertainment you provide. Hope it's a long one, with lots of funny bits. Good to read you, Bob.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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I just love your tales of demons and humans. I liked their meeting, with both of them screaming. I could see it all, you describe it so well. Funny! Lol! So how they communicate is a good part of the fun. I look forward to the entertainment you provide. Hope it's a long one, with lots of funny bits. Good to read you, Bob.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thanks. This is just a (longish) short story I'm afraid
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved this. I love when the realization comes that we are talking to a creative. When he says, "That's my name. John" - perfect. This is an imaginative and enjoyable story that easily kept my interest. Terrific read.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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I loved this. I love when the realization comes that we are talking to a creative. When he says, "That's my name. John" - perfect. This is an imaginative and enjoyable story that easily kept my interest. Terrific read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I'm not surprised it was crying out for release. This is so good. Call Five-five-five-seven-two-six-five (No need to phone, just shout) and John appears. I loved it. And the fact that John and Julius were equally frightened of each other. And wonderful character development. The patience/persistance of Julius was so cleverly shown. Oh, please do find where you're going with it.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I'm not surprised it was crying out for release. This is so good. Call Five-five-five-seven-two-six-five (No need to phone, just shout) and John appears. I loved it. And the fact that John and Julius were equally frightened of each other. And wonderful character development. The patience/persistance of Julius was so cleverly shown. Oh, please do find where you're going with it.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're very kind, thank you. I've got the next couple of scenes rattling around in my head. We'll see how it goes.