A New Sole
New soles-new job30 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
It is funny how a new dress or suit or fancy new shoes sometimes mark a new beginning. A date possibly, or a job interview. The possibilities are endless.
You nailed using the words with something that got me wondering. This was more like a flash fiction piece. Well done. Now you need to do a follow up piece about this new adventure. Well done .
Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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It is funny how a new dress or suit or fancy new shoes sometimes mark a new beginning. A date possibly, or a job interview. The possibilities are endless.
You nailed using the words with something that got me wondering. This was more like a flash fiction piece. Well done. Now you need to do a follow up piece about this new adventure. Well done .
Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job writing this poem with the words supplied! I didn't think anyone could pull off the prompt in such a short poem, but you did it and you did it well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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You did a great job writing this poem with the words supplied! I didn't think anyone could pull off the prompt in such a short poem, but you did it and you did it well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A New Sole, has the required words and finds the double meaning in a person and his/her wardrobe, brought back into a performance state, and ready to step out. Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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This poem, A New Sole, has the required words and finds the double meaning in a person and his/her wardrobe, brought back into a performance state, and ready to step out. Nice.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from BermyBye50
Gunner,
A pleasant reminder of my time in the military and the importance of successfully achieving a perfect spit shine on the toe of my boots. you incorporated all five words in your two line poem. The second line encapsulates the expectation of a great shine.
Well-done,
Eugene
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Gunner,
A pleasant reminder of my time in the military and the importance of successfully achieving a perfect spit shine on the toe of my boots. you incorporated all five words in your two line poem. The second line encapsulates the expectation of a great shine.
Well-done,
Eugene
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi Gunner Lil!
You ably captured the excitement of a new job adventure in just a few words (from the prompt). Your illustration is paired nicely with your verse.
Mark
P.S. Typically I am not a fan of initial caps and/or punctuation for short poems. But in your case, consider adding a period or a long dash after your first line. You can shorten "will begin" to "begins," if the contest administrators will not penalize you for doing the same (-;
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Hi Gunner Lil!
You ably captured the excitement of a new job adventure in just a few words (from the prompt). Your illustration is paired nicely with your verse.
Mark
P.S. Typically I am not a fan of initial caps and/or punctuation for short poems. But in your case, consider adding a period or a long dash after your first line. You can shorten "will begin" to "begins," if the contest administrators will not penalize you for doing the same (-;
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you!!
Comment from Raul1
You have made very good use of your chosen words. It is very creative and unique. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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You have made very good use of your chosen words. It is very creative and unique. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"The magic of the shine on my black shoes excited me
A new adventure will begin soon"
Great use of the words that were given for this contest. What a great idea to start a new job with a new pair of shoes.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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"The magic of the shine on my black shoes excited me
A new adventure will begin soon"
Great use of the words that were given for this contest. What a great idea to start a new job with a new pair of shoes.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome
Comment from Eternal Muse
This put a big smile on my face. You certainly complied with the contest topic with flying colors. Your picture got my attention, and your title is hilarious!
Good creative imagery and visuals. I wish you the best luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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This put a big smile on my face. You certainly complied with the contest topic with flying colors. Your picture got my attention, and your title is hilarious!
Good creative imagery and visuals. I wish you the best luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on placing the contest, GL. I enjoyed you
poem. I Iiked how you wrote such a succinct entry. Your image
choice paired perfectly with the required words. Your words were
descriptive and well thought out. I could see an individual with
those new black shoes ready to take on the world.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on placing the contest, GL. I enjoyed you
poem. I Iiked how you wrote such a succinct entry. Your image
choice paired perfectly with the required words. Your words were
descriptive and well thought out. I could see an individual with
those new black shoes ready to take on the world.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
I don't how long this was supposed to be, but you did a really good job using the required words with the two sentences you have written. Great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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I don't how long this was supposed to be, but you did a really good job using the required words with the two sentences you have written. Great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
