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Dear Father

We need you

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Comment from irishauthorme
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Thank you for posting The Lord's Prayer.
You are right, this time-proven prayer is often overlooked in the long-winded sermons we hear in church today. We recently changed from a large-congregation church to a small, more personal church and we love the pastor, and the small group of people who attend.
Wonder declaration of your faith!
irish

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    Thank you, irish. It irritates me. Mans ego, does much damage. Blessings, Barbara. xo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for the beautiful reminder. Yes, Jesus taught us to pray. I have often thought of all the time Jesus spent in pray as perfect as He was. He set the example; we must spend much of our time in prayer.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Barbara. Yes, so needed now in desparate times and always. Blessings, Barbara. xo
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing this about the Lord's Prayer. I am so glad that Jesus taught his disciples this and left us a pattern for the way we should pray, starting out with praise and worship, asking God to have His will in our lives and our world, and then presenting our petitions to Him, and ending with praise again.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Anne for sharing this with us. Blessings, Barbara. xo
reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Aug-2022
    You are welcome
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Yes, this is a powerful prayer. Thanks for reminding us to pray it again and again.

There is a big power in prayer. It heals and saves, and Jesus always hears our prayers.

Thank you very much. God bless.

T

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    God Bless you T and Thank you. Barbara. xo
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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How easy it seems to be to take the simple and make it hard to understand. Jesus, said this prayer for a reason. It was to be Christians standards, along with the laws.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Thank you, This was posted, meant as praise and a reminder. Blessings, Barbara. xo
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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In today's society, there are people who do not believe in God. They do not want to hear his name. And at Christmas, we wish people "Happy Holiday."
I feel that when they took prayer out of school in the sixties, things began getting out of control. Then they took away pictures and statues of Jesus and God.

Now look at the world. Look at what we are going through. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Then wnen they added, press 1 for English. But taking prayer out of schools was the worse. Blessings, Barbara. xo
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 17-Aug-2022
    Oh yes, press 1 for English. Thankfully, more people speak fluent English these days. Blessings to you. Have a great evening.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    You also Carolyn. xo. B
Comment from Frank Malley
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"Dear Father" includes the complete "Our Father" prayer of such great Christian fame. The prayer can't really be included in judging the poem; its wording has been around for centuries. I think a better job could've been done on this if the author considered setting up a situation in which the recitation of the prayer solved a human problem - like Tiny Tim's "God bless us each and every one."

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Frank. It was meant as a Praise and a reminder. Blessings, Barbara. xo
reply by Frank Malley on 16-Aug-2022
    Live long and prosper, Barbara.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
    TY You also. B
reply by Frank Malley on 16-Aug-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
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You are right, Lovnpeace, about us needed this prayer and a lot more prayer in general. This prayer is said daily in the Catholic Mass.
It is beautiful artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
I have a poem called His Words and Mine, based on The Our Father.

Joan

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Joan. You are so right-prayers greatly needed. Blessings, Barbara. xo
Comment from harmony13
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Beautiful! Yes the prayer is beautiful! I was sorry to hear it is ignored
in some churches. In my church it is said every day. These words mean
a lot to mean and help through my daily life. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Thank you....Maria

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Maria. God Bless you. TY for your kind words. Barbara. xo
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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A prayer I honestly begin my nightly prayers with every single night.

3rd line: (they) should be (thy)
4th line: (they) should be (thy)
5th line: (they) should be (thy)

The most succinct and beautiful prayer available. And we do need it now, more than ever before.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
    omg. TY. Did I really do that? corrected. Thank you, humbly grateful. Blessings. Barbara. xo