So Wrong
One can love alone but it takes two to BE in love.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I don't get why shorts are so often contests. Not much written, so there's not much to say. I stay away from entering unless moved upon succinctly as it is not my nature to be brief. As for this ditty I like it, and the one suggestion would be to capitalize Wrong.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I don't get why shorts are so often contests. Not much written, so there's not much to say. I stay away from entering unless moved upon succinctly as it is not my nature to be brief. As for this ditty I like it, and the one suggestion would be to capitalize Wrong.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your suggestion and kind review. I agree and will make the change after the voting is done. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 1-9-1 poem. The message is crisp and truthful. I like the text in white font centered on the visual. The font could be a tad larger for my old eyes, but most would see it as being okay. I would make the "F" lowercase and remove all of the periods. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This is a good 1-9-1 poem. The message is crisp and truthful. I like the text in white font centered on the visual. The font could be a tad larger for my old eyes, but most would see it as being okay. I would make the "F" lowercase and remove all of the periods. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You earned it. You are welcome.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You are not the only one in this situation. We really do not know the other person. No matter how long we live with someone, there are things that are hidden. Sometimes you find out, however, often their secrets go with them and others to the grave. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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You are not the only one in this situation. We really do not know the other person. No matter how long we live with someone, there are things that are hidden. Sometimes you find out, however, often their secrets go with them and others to the grave. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You are welcome.
