Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Sunday Night Poem 2"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from judiverse
Well, I'm not sure what's going on here. One good thing, if no one was harmed, jail time probably won't be very long. I am reminded of a "Murder, She Wrote" episode I just watched. Jessica was able to nail the murderer because he was shown on video with a pencil in his pocket. In another on, the pencil was missing. Then a later picture showed him with the pencil in his pocket again. Jessica surmised he dropped the pencil when he went off to murder his rival, and dropped it in the heat of the moment. Then he went back to get the pencil. I never realized how important pencils could be. judi
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Well, I'm not sure what's going on here. One good thing, if no one was harmed, jail time probably won't be very long. I am reminded of a "Murder, She Wrote" episode I just watched. Jessica was able to nail the murderer because he was shown on video with a pencil in his pocket. In another on, the pencil was missing. Then a later picture showed him with the pencil in his pocket again. Jessica surmised he dropped the pencil when he went off to murder his rival, and dropped it in the heat of the moment. Then he went back to get the pencil. I never realized how important pencils could be. judi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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This was also a mystery. Why is anyone using a pencil?
Comment from nomi338
See! What did I tell you? When you don't listen, bad things can happen. A drug addled brain can resemble a fried egg, according to TV ads. I hope you can be bailed out. I would have sent you some cash, but I had already pressed Enter on the keyboard. Anyway best of luck to you, and don't mention my name.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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See! What did I tell you? When you don't listen, bad things can happen. A drug addled brain can resemble a fried egg, according to TV ads. I hope you can be bailed out. I would have sent you some cash, but I had already pressed Enter on the keyboard. Anyway best of luck to you, and don't mention my name.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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For my one call I dialed the bail bondsman. His attorney answered.
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It must suck to be you.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Another clever nonsense poem disguised in prose. I like it since I will have higher chance of getting a free bump. For the third line, you can say:
the pencil not sharp like a nail.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Haha. Another clever nonsense poem disguised in prose. I like it since I will have higher chance of getting a free bump. For the third line, you can say:
the pencil not sharp like a nail.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Great idea!
Comment from Rhodesia
My apologies but from my perspective, I can't grasp how they went to jail with the pencil, perhaps it caused noise? Or a track of evidence? There's a gap in the story that the audience has to fill.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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My apologies but from my perspective, I can't grasp how they went to jail with the pencil, perhaps it caused noise? Or a track of evidence? There's a gap in the story that the audience has to fill.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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It is entitled Sunday Night Poem "2".
