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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Sunday Night Poem"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from nomi338
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Writing under the influence of certain substances can cause phenomenal events to take place. They can cause hallucinations, black outs, psychological blackouts and other types of events. My advice young man, is something that was once told to me, Leave the drugs alone! :))

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    I left the drugs alone and someone stole them.
reply by nomi338 on 15-Aug-2022
    Serves you right. You were supposed to send them to me.
Comment from lyenochka
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Quoth the raven, "Nothing more." Glad you are inspired to write on a Sunday night. We might all get distractions in life that makes it harder to get the written poem to Fanstory.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thanks, Helen
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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"Nothing more" makes me think of Edgar Allan Poe's poem "Raven". Then you should say "Never more" and then you have to write a lot more stanzas of these nonsense poem. Take a look of this poem if you haven't. It's a great one.

Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thanks, Lisa
Comment from Rhodesia
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Haha, the experience is familiar. As with all arts, writing, though soul-inspired, requires discipline. A push greater than the initial spark, especially when the inertia is disturbed. Good luck to usð???

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Rhodesia.