No Marine Left Behind
a 50 word story15 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Rod,
I counted 47 words. But I counted hyphenated words as "1".
"brothers-in-arms"
Maybe I'm wrong, but I thought that hyphenated words are counted as one word.
The Marine motto came through loud and clear...
"Marines are America's expeditionary force in readiness, not just in battle, but every day. We never leave a Marine behind. If you see a fellow Marine who needs help, step up and step in." ...I like that!
I also like your explanation of "Jarhead".
Isn't it something what they can do today with prosthetics? A marathon race has to be very difficult wearing an artificial limb like that.
It's no wonder that you won the contest with this entry. Congrats!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Hi Rod,
I counted 47 words. But I counted hyphenated words as "1".
"brothers-in-arms"
Maybe I'm wrong, but I thought that hyphenated words are counted as one word.
The Marine motto came through loud and clear...
"Marines are America's expeditionary force in readiness, not just in battle, but every day. We never leave a Marine behind. If you see a fellow Marine who needs help, step up and step in." ...I like that!
I also like your explanation of "Jarhead".
Isn't it something what they can do today with prosthetics? A marathon race has to be very difficult wearing an artificial limb like that.
It's no wonder that you won the contest with this entry. Congrats!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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I am thrilled and honored that you found this story posted awhile ago. Many thanks, Kimbob, for your praise. Every word processor is different when it comes to counting words. I use Apple Pages, which apparently counts hyphenates as separate words. Rod
Comment from Jill McCauslin
You managed to tell this story in just 50 words, an impressive feat. What a great story. The photo works well with the story.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You managed to tell this story in just 50 words, an impressive feat. What a great story. The photo works well with the story.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Jill, for your high praise of my shortie. Rod
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Would that every living man or woman could have that "Oohrah!" attitude. Everybody, helping everybody else, whenever and wherever. What a world that would be.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Would that every living man or woman could have that "Oohrah!" attitude. Everybody, helping everybody else, whenever and wherever. What a world that would be.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Oh, do I agree with you, Gary. I truly appreciate your sharing my shortie and your comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. Your story made me tear up. It's a great way to honor our marines. I remember the movie, jarhead. Do you know where the name came from?
Good words count and story line. A great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Excellent entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. Your story made me tear up. It's a great way to honor our marines. I remember the movie, jarhead. Do you know where the name came from?
Good words count and story line. A great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Hi, Gypsy. Thank you very much for sharing my story and your kind praise. See my Notes for history of JARHEAD.
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word flash fiction story, No Marine Left Behind, has the required word count and gives me a personal high thinking about this very likely situation and carry-through. Semper Fi!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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This fifty-word flash fiction story, No Marine Left Behind, has the required word count and gives me a personal high thinking about this very likely situation and carry-through. Semper Fi!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my shortie.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice writing. Good work.
Hoorah. Semper Fi.
I wondered about your word choice - hapless, not sure if I would ever want to be called that. But I looked it up, and it suits.
Don't you just grin hearing other branches talk about their version of boot camp?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Nice writing. Good work.
Hoorah. Semper Fi.
I wondered about your word choice - hapless, not sure if I would ever want to be called that. But I looked it up, and it suits.
Don't you just grin hearing other branches talk about their version of boot camp?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Wayne, for sharing my shortie and your comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Semper fidelis reigns true today and has since the beginning of the red stripe brigade, the stripe that runs down their pant legs on blues. You may want to check out its history. Very well done.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Semper fidelis reigns true today and has since the beginning of the red stripe brigade, the stripe that runs down their pant legs on blues. You may want to check out its history. Very well done.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thank you very uch, Tom, for sharing and praising my shortie and that bit of history about the red stripe.
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Absolutely. In years, now past, I joined a group of Marine aviators to golf and wrote a poem about The Marines which included a history of that stripe.
Comment from Teri7
This is a great 50 Word Flash Fiction story. I have heard that many times about the Marines. I have a lot of respect for them and had a great friend that was a Marine. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This is a great 50 Word Flash Fiction story. I have heard that many times about the Marines. I have a lot of respect for them and had a great friend that was a Marine. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri, for your exuberant response to my story.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and story to go with it.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have a good opening paragraph
establishing the premise.
-The middle section is also good
as another Marine comes to the aid
of the one who fell.
-Good use of dialogue and ending.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and story to go with it.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have a good opening paragraph
establishing the premise.
-The middle section is also good
as another Marine comes to the aid
of the one who fell.
-Good use of dialogue and ending.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Pam, for the comprehensive review and praise of my shortie.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Nice story of comradeship. Thanks for your explanation of Jarheads. You speak of relationships that are precious and on-going. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Nice story of comradeship. Thanks for your explanation of Jarheads. You speak of relationships that are precious and on-going. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Wendy, for sharing and praising my shortie.
