Chapel at Bayside
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Jesus Died 4 You"A Book of Poetry by a Priest.
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Comment from Fleedleflump
I like that your first piece here is a subversion of the well known hymn so you can put your own spin and detail on it. The second has an effective contrast, turning from the light to highlight the dark. I love 'dipped in pain' - what a great phrase!
Mike
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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I like that your first piece here is a subversion of the well known hymn so you can put your own spin and detail on it. The second has an effective contrast, turning from the light to highlight the dark. I love 'dipped in pain' - what a great phrase!
Mike
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much Michael these were both worked at at separate churches on Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mahinou Remistar
my name is RĂ©mi I am a man, I live in Togo. I can't speak English well but I speak French well because I'm in a French-speaking country.Please excuse me if I write something wrong. But I am interested in your page and I would like you to help me
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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my name is RĂ©mi I am a man, I live in Togo. I can't speak English well but I speak French well because I'm in a French-speaking country.Please excuse me if I write something wrong. But I am interested in your page and I would like you to help me
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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My response to you?
Is you get a * Poor back too.
I suggest that you leave
Fanstory.
Obviously not a writer but a scammer.
