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Grunge
2 total reviews
Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem, Carlos' Girl. Great job
with the syllable count per line. Your words read well and
were descriptive. It's difficult to think about bands when the
members pass and there's only one. What kind of thoughts do
have about their pals?
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
He must have survivors guilt. All his fellow singers are gone. Very sad indeed.
Comment from
jessizero
I like the way you used the "still alive" bit. I also like that you rhymed it. I hope Eddie lives a long time.
I was in the hospital when Chris Cornell died. I did not take it well.
Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
Yeah, that was sad when Chris Cornell died. Such a talent.
Thank you for your review. Have a great week.
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