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Sex Wax

The Flow

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a naughty sensual write with a subtle hint as to what is going on here, ride the orgasmic tide and enjoy the moment, clever words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    I tried to keep it just this side of clean lol so i would not need to go in the " Adult section".
    Thank you for reviewing Dolly
    Xoxo C.G.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem is a well illustrated 5-7-5 of the feelings of the excitement of early on in a love affair.
Good luck in the contest, Judith.
Keep writing and say healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    It also may be about surfing.

    Thank you for reviewing
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    Sex Wax is a brand of surf wax. i like to think the poem is about both surfing and love!
reply by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2022
    Judith,
    It could be about both. Or love of surfing.
    Joan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    Both certainly are addicting lol