True Love Kouta
true love Kouta5 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Jake, nice poem about love and romance. Nice presentation. Good connection between lines. You have the wrong form and syllable count. Please see below.....
The kouta form is 4 lines, you have 5. The kouta syllable count is 7/5/7/5 or 7/7/7/5; you have 4/7/4/6/10
I met my fate 4
When she walked in/to my life 7
Becoming real 4
We wed three months later 6
40 years after we're still together 10
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Hello, Jake, nice poem about love and romance. Nice presentation. Good connection between lines. You have the wrong form and syllable count. Please see below.....
The kouta form is 4 lines, you have 5. The kouta syllable count is 7/5/7/5 or 7/7/7/5; you have 4/7/4/6/10
I met my fate 4
When she walked in/to my life 7
Becoming real 4
We wed three months later 6
40 years after we're still together 10
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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thanks I will revise accordingly
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
That's quite a photo Jake. Is that you in the picture?
Three months. That's pretty good. I have a similar situation only we waited two years to tie the knot. But it was a "walk into my life" situation also.
Sounds like a heartfelt verse Jake. I take it you are very happily married. That is wonderful, so many have issues to deal with today.
Good one.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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That's quite a photo Jake. Is that you in the picture?
Three months. That's pretty good. I have a similar situation only we waited two years to tie the knot. But it was a "walk into my life" situation also.
Sounds like a heartfelt verse Jake. I take it you are very happily married. That is wonderful, so many have issues to deal with today.
Good one.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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thanks a lot
Comment from Mary Vigasin
40 years! Your love and pride in your wife and marriage come through in your words.
Getting married after only three months together proves that both of you were certain you found the right one.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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40 years! Your love and pride in your wife and marriage come through in your words.
Getting married after only three months together proves that both of you were certain you found the right one.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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thanks it has been a great journey so far
Comment from jessizero
This was truly romantic. I am touched that she was your fate, and that you are still together 40 years later. Thank you for sharing this here, and, as always, best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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This was truly romantic. I am touched that she was your fate, and that you are still together 40 years later. Thank you for sharing this here, and, as always, best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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thanks glad you liked this true love Kouta
Comment from dellsworthpoet
The poem flows well and meets the requirements of the form. With the first and third line rhyming I almost expected the last line to be "even from the start."
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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The poem flows well and meets the requirements of the form. With the first and third line rhyming I almost expected the last line to be "even from the start."
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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thanks
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You are welcome.
