El Greco the best
love the Spanish masters3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I find your choice of artist appealing as I also like El Greco's art. However, he was a prominent painter of the Renaissance, not a surrealist, as he lived in 1541 - 1614. Also, as the contest entry is supposed to be about a painting, I am wondering why the image you included is not actually by El Greco himself, but is an amateurish copy of one of his paintings, dated in the bottom right corner 1992.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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I find your choice of artist appealing as I also like El Greco's art. However, he was a prominent painter of the Renaissance, not a surrealist, as he lived in 1541 - 1614. Also, as the contest entry is supposed to be about a painting, I am wondering why the image you included is not actually by El Greco himself, but is an amateurish copy of one of his paintings, dated in the bottom right corner 1992.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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thanks for the comments I will look into it further
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and thanks for the note.
-You do a good job with the poem, showing
the artist and the type of paintings you enjoy.
-The idea in the last line is good, but this
is the syllable breakdown:
[sur-re-al-is-tic]
-You could make it a noun
surrealism and leave out the 'so' or
you could go with:
great surrealist
[sur-re-al-ist]
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and thanks for the note.
-You do a good job with the poem, showing
the artist and the type of paintings you enjoy.
-The idea in the last line is good, but this
is the syllable breakdown:
[sur-re-al-is-tic]
-You could make it a noun
surrealism and leave out the 'so' or
you could go with:
great surrealist
[sur-re-al-ist]
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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thanks I will fix this
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You are welcome. Send a reply when you do, and I will look at it.
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thanks fixed it according to your suggestion
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You have to take out the line "So surrealistic."
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Look at your poem; you have 4 lines. You didn't delete "so surrealistic." Your poem won't qualify for the contest that way. The last line is "Great surrealist."
Comment from Regina Elliott
I love El Greco's artworks too.
They have a unique beauty
to them. I painted a replica
of one of his works named,
"The Disrobing Of Christ."
It's hanging at the local
veterans shelter because that's where I felt it needed
to go. My very best wishes
for your short and well penned poem. Have a creative weekend. Blessings.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I love El Greco's artworks too.
They have a unique beauty
to them. I painted a replica
of one of his works named,
"The Disrobing Of Christ."
It's hanging at the local
veterans shelter because that's where I felt it needed
to go. My very best wishes
for your short and well penned poem. Have a creative weekend. Blessings.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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thanks a lot. I got to enjoy Spanish art when I lived in Madrid. El Greco, Goya and Salvado Dali were are my favorites. Pradae was a great museum.
