Attuned to the Breeze
Wind chime music13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous entry in the lune 3/5/3 poetry contest, these wind chimes are a wonderful invention, (whoever did) they ha a lovely, almost ghostly, sound, well done, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
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What a marvellous entry in the lune 3/5/3 poetry contest, these wind chimes are a wonderful invention, (whoever did) they ha a lovely, almost ghostly, sound, well done, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
You did a great job of evoking that ethereal sound of dancing wind chimes. Great idea for the air prompt. I very much enjoyed the read. Good luck when the voting starts!
Mike
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You did a great job of evoking that ethereal sound of dancing wind chimes. Great idea for the air prompt. I very much enjoyed the read. Good luck when the voting starts!
Mike
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from RodG
There is nothing more cheerful than wind chimes "tinkling" on a breezy day. Your short poem makes those chimes almost audible. Nice use of alliteration in line 1. Rod
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There is nothing more cheerful than wind chimes "tinkling" on a breezy day. Your short poem makes those chimes almost audible. Nice use of alliteration in line 1. Rod
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
