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Why do nations plot?

A poem.

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Comment from aryr
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That indeed was a rather interesting picture, Roy. I really enjoyed the words you said because God is real and His Son, Christ is real. Never doubt that! Blessings.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Alie, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by aryr on 13-Aug-2022
    Most welcome, Roy. Blessings.
Comment from Deniz22
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God laughs at the audacity of those who think their numbers can overcome the will of Him who created them! How ridiculous the faith of blind men who trust in their equally blind guides! Good one, brother Roy!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Dennis for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It's a shame that leaders of countries aren't followers of God, and they don't listen to His messages. Our world would be a much better place in which to live. Thank you for sharing the very noteworthy poem with us.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the futility of oddities inspired by Satan to destabilize the overcoming resilience of those, who have their faith entrenched in the Lord Jesus Christ.

The work highlights the tumultuous effect of Satan's onslaught on the human and physical environment; and how they undoubtedly degrade its incidence and overcome its fiery darts by faith acquired through the grace of God.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes, personification, similes, metaphors, alliterations, onomatopoeias and imagery.

Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Lioyd for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 13-Aug-2022
    Amen. Remain Blessed.
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 13-Aug-2022
    Amen. Remain Blessed.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thank you
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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What a powerful proclamation for the Lord. He is so much in control that he can and I'm sure, does laugh at our tiny, feeble attempts at overthrowing him or his believers. He IS coming.

Good one Roy.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Gary, for these splendid comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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I've had this calling as all God's people do, to be watchful, alert, and full of prayers and intersessions for the Lord's return. I feel it is soon as heralded by the prophetic signs and wonders we are seeing daily. The signs have increased just as Jesus said it would. Marantha!

Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous post,
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Sally, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This poem seems to point out that the end of the world is approaching, with allusions to "the day draws near as watchers keep
a vigil on the city walls," with other references to twilight and especially the second to last line also. It has a steady, regular meter/rhythm. Four quatrains in iambic tetrameter give it a solid feel, with a hymn lyric quality as well. I liked these lines: the faithful hold
to grace and truth, let trust enfold.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Crystie, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy