Comment from Patricia Tiffany Morris

Good

I'd like to read this without the quotation marks. If all of it is someone speaking, you don't need the quotes. If it's short story and someone is speaking, that's different. But I adore your Come with me statement and your courage! Keep pressing on!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022

Number one.
You need to understand that this is what I call sisters.
Two separate writings.
The first by me and the second by my dead son who donated the organs of course.
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I see what I call a lot of skip reviewing here on Fanstory. Yes, where people don't even read the editors notes.
Which will have an impact and help them understand.
But Instead they only take enough time to pick apart the writing.
And, especially when it comes to gramical issues.
You need to review this again and forget about quotation marks.
And, it's not a short story or even a poem.
This is what would be called "A Real Life True Story"
Yes, in order to teach people more about...
'Organ-Tissue Donations' Which of course is in the editor's Notes.
And, as for to keep pressing on thing?
Almost an insult by the way just like people that post keep on writing.
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I pressed on now for almost 20 years and written over 850 books.
Yes, and I only recently started with the thought of publishing because I'm not looking to make Money.
I'm looking to educate and show my son to make him more proud of me.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

You have some beautiful perspectives and a knack for transporting us into them. I particularly enjoyed the interviews with recipients, each having a case and a life and a gratitude.

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022

Well thanks very much Michael and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky