Unburdened
Freedom2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Your poem accurately described the peaceful feeling that comes with inhaling "ocean air." Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Your poem accurately described the peaceful feeling that comes with inhaling "ocean air." Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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I appreciate your comments.
Comment from GWHARGIS
As someone who lives on the coast, your poem resonated with me. It is evocative and meaningful. The rhythmic waves lulling one into a realm of peacefulness. Good luck to you in the contest.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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As someone who lives on the coast, your poem resonated with me. It is evocative and meaningful. The rhythmic waves lulling one into a realm of peacefulness. Good luck to you in the contest.
Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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I love the ocean and the peacefulness one feels by the ocean. Thank you for getting the message I tried to get across.
