Where can I go?
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from RainbewLatte
Wow. Wow has always been such an underwhelming word I find myself trying to avoid using but this poem has undeniably left me awe-struck. Seeing the way you've painted such scenery with both words and rhymes, rhythms too with such flow, it turns what's written into something more. Thanks for sharing. All the best and so much love.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Wow. Wow has always been such an underwhelming word I find myself trying to avoid using but this poem has undeniably left me awe-struck. Seeing the way you've painted such scenery with both words and rhymes, rhythms too with such flow, it turns what's written into something more. Thanks for sharing. All the best and so much love.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thanks Jonathon, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from BermyBye50
Roy,
You always write inspirational poetry that touches the heart, soothes one's soul and lifts the spirit. This is another of your inspired writes that honors your faith and shares the glory of our Creator in every word penned. The reference verse Psalm 139:7-14 is perfect.
God bless,
Eugene
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Roy,
You always write inspirational poetry that touches the heart, soothes one's soul and lifts the spirit. This is another of your inspired writes that honors your faith and shares the glory of our Creator in every word penned. The reference verse Psalm 139:7-14 is perfect.
God bless,
Eugene
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks Eugene, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is another lovely poem, Roy, with questions and answers. I loved the lines...
Yet where can darkness flee from light?
'cause God exists in deepest night.
We never think of God in the darkness, only the light. But of course He's there! He's everywhere, and will always be. No evil can enter where God stands. I really enjoyed the lesson in this one, my dear friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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This is another lovely poem, Roy, with questions and answers. I loved the lines...
Yet where can darkness flee from light?
'cause God exists in deepest night.
We never think of God in the darkness, only the light. But of course He's there! He's everywhere, and will always be. No evil can enter where God stands. I really enjoyed the lesson in this one, my dear friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks Sandra, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
God exists in the deepest night..I liked this line. He is there everywhere and darkness and light can ,at the same time,represent Him .It is His choice as to how He should appear..
Loved your spiritual poems..
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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God exists in the deepest night..I liked this line. He is there everywhere and darkness and light can ,at the same time,represent Him .It is His choice as to how He should appear..
Loved your spiritual poems..
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks Sanku for these marvellous comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Terry wrote
I read this poem four times before feeling ready to respond ... Such a profound psalm to elicit these lines from you. I am always humbled to read works written by those so familiar with the psalms ... thank you for bringing this one to conscious level.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I read this poem four times before feeling ready to respond ... Such a profound psalm to elicit these lines from you. I am always humbled to read works written by those so familiar with the psalms ... thank you for bringing this one to conscious level.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another masterful traditional poem expressing the author's deep faith.
like thisYet where can darkness flee from light?
'cause God exists in deepest night.
There's no place where His foes can hide,
for none resists the crimson tide. stanza the bests
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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another masterful traditional poem expressing the author's deep faith.
like thisYet where can darkness flee from light?
'cause God exists in deepest night.
There's no place where His foes can hide,
for none resists the crimson tide. stanza the bests
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Jake, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LJbutterfly
In 1967, two singers, Marvin Gaye and Tammi Terrell released a secular song called, "Ain't No Mountain High Enough," with words that included, no valley low enough, or river wide enough to keep me away from you. When I first read Psalm 139, which gave me great comfort, I thought of that song. But God goes much farther than the writer of the song ever imagined. I too, "love the light of early morn," knowing "God exists in deepest night." Your poetic words also give me great comfort, for God surrounds us.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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In 1967, two singers, Marvin Gaye and Tammi Terrell released a secular song called, "Ain't No Mountain High Enough," with words that included, no valley low enough, or river wide enough to keep me away from you. When I first read Psalm 139, which gave me great comfort, I thought of that song. But God goes much farther than the writer of the song ever imagined. I too, "love the light of early morn," knowing "God exists in deepest night." Your poetic words also give me great comfort, for God surrounds us.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Maria, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
Another great poem, Roy! I have been wondering how you write so many poems in so short a time - but I just noticed that this one is one you've written last year. That clears things up for me. Haha. This is a harmonious poem with great rhyme and rhythm, and a nice interpretation of the scripture you quote in the author's notes section. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Another great poem, Roy! I have been wondering how you write so many poems in so short a time - but I just noticed that this one is one you've written last year. That clears things up for me. Haha. This is a harmonious poem with great rhyme and rhythm, and a nice interpretation of the scripture you quote in the author's notes section. Nicely done!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Donna, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
From conception, he ensures we stay safe. From humans to animals. What a plan our Lord had. Perfection. He is the Master of our universe. He did not cut corners in his master plans. He gave us a brain to follow rules and regulations. Hands to work with to provide for our needs. The things we need are within reach. We have to make an effort. Thank you.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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From conception, he ensures we stay safe. From humans to animals. What a plan our Lord had. Perfection. He is the Master of our universe. He did not cut corners in his master plans. He gave us a brain to follow rules and regulations. Hands to work with to provide for our needs. The things we need are within reach. We have to make an effort. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Carolyn, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from amahra
Psalms 139:7 is one of my favorite Old Testament scriptures. Thank you for your Author's note and thank you for posting this beautiful spiritual poem. You are always a blessing, Roy.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Psalms 139:7 is one of my favorite Old Testament scriptures. Thank you for your Author's note and thank you for posting this beautiful spiritual poem. You are always a blessing, Roy.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Amahra,for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
