Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet! you have your first vote.

Well as I see it, if you can find your things with ease in the mess then there is no need to worry. (biggrin).

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

The problem often is that I can?t remember where it is (-;

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a relatable short poem. Thank goodness it is just me and my dog. The syllable count is accurate. The text can be easily read. The visual fits well. Once you download your image, you could crop the photo, so the identifying info isn't part of your presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Thanks Sandra for your review and stars. Your suggestion is good, but my downloaded illustrations have all their warts.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I can relate to the messy desk, but I usually knew
where things were.
-I like the use of 'overstuffed'.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Pleased you liked this post Pam. It is too true for me.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Aug-2022

You are very welcome.