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A 5-7-5-7-7 poem
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Comment from
Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Mark,
You paint a clear picture of a husband looking at other women. It's so unrespectable and I hate it. Unfortunately it's very common.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. "- Atticus
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
Thank you for your review and insightful words.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A sweet romantic encounter between man and wife and there is great comfort in the closeness in this situation Mark, as his eyes are still discreet even though they are married. This is so magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
Thank you for your review and kind words.
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