Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Amber Sky"Romantic Tanka Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
the eye catching artwork drew me in immediately.
Those hues , here in their darker, warmer tones , remind me of a rainbow.
Just looking at that pic make my heart melt .. i want to immerge myself in that warm embrace.
Your entry made me feel good.
Ciao!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Ciao!
the eye catching artwork drew me in immediately.
Those hues , here in their darker, warmer tones , remind me of a rainbow.
Just looking at that pic make my heart melt .. i want to immerge myself in that warm embrace.
Your entry made me feel good.
Ciao!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs, ciao!
Gypsy
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You too Gypsy ,
Ciao!
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
Your description in this poem is awesome: Amber sky, soft, lush green grass, fragrant caves.
A very nice Tanka, in that your love or passion is for nature.
Good luck, Gypsy.
Blessings.
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Gypsy,
Your description in this poem is awesome: Amber sky, soft, lush green grass, fragrant caves.
A very nice Tanka, in that your love or passion is for nature.
Good luck, Gypsy.
Blessings.
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. Cindy. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, another lovely presentation and I'm still seeing those violet buds that are peppering the lush green grass. Lots of different textures in your poem and enjoyed the many senses that you invoke.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Wow, another lovely presentation and I'm still seeing those violet buds that are peppering the lush green grass. Lots of different textures in your poem and enjoyed the many senses that you invoke.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, Helen. I'm glad you have sometime to get on fanstory 😃
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, lovely, colorful, descriptive and creative.
I like how the author used rainbow colors to enhance the beauty of these
words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork and color scheme
go so well with this poem. Gypsy, hope you are doing well!.....Maria
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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The author's words are engaging, lovely, colorful, descriptive and creative.
I like how the author used rainbow colors to enhance the beauty of these
words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork and color scheme
go so well with this poem. Gypsy, hope you are doing well!.....Maria
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."- Atticus
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
"curvy, rolling," "soft lush," "violet buds," "moist and fragrant." If I were a dirty minded old man (which I am) I might think you were describing my wife or a woman at least.
Very nice, almost sensual.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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"curvy, rolling," "soft lush," "violet buds," "moist and fragrant." If I were a dirty minded old man (which I am) I might think you were describing my wife or a woman at least.
Very nice, almost sensual.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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You are right, I'm describing a woman with nature metaphor or vice versa. LoL. Not everyone catches does.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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YES! Nailed it. Great one Gypsy. Made my day.
Comment from aryr
What an amazing tanka, Gypsy. The picture was beautiful, of the ocean which had rolling waves yet presented a calm nature. Your words were direct but gentle enough to capture the true nature. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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What an amazing tanka, Gypsy. The picture was beautiful, of the ocean which had rolling waves yet presented a calm nature. Your words were direct but gentle enough to capture the true nature. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind review and valuable feedback. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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So welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Wendy G
Beautifully presented, with an excellent choice of image and shading of fonts. I think it has a subtle secondary layer of meaning, which also can be a valid interpretation of your words.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Beautifully presented, with an excellent choice of image and shading of fonts. I think it has a subtle secondary layer of meaning, which also can be a valid interpretation of your words.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind review and valuable feedback. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have penned a lovely, vividly descriptive poem about an awe-inspiring scene in nature, pinpointing each "level" as it relates to the rest of the picture. Pretty artwork
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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You have penned a lovely, vividly descriptive poem about an awe-inspiring scene in nature, pinpointing each "level" as it relates to the rest of the picture. Pretty artwork
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Good job for writing a Tanka about the amber sky. The beautiful picture provided plenty to write about. Now after reading it a few times, I think this poem used the nature as metaphor for human intercourse. Otherwise, what else could this mean: moist and fragrant cave?
Are I right?
Well done and I hope I still have a six.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Good job for writing a Tanka about the amber sky. The beautiful picture provided plenty to write about. Now after reading it a few times, I think this poem used the nature as metaphor for human intercourse. Otherwise, what else could this mean: moist and fragrant cave?
Are I right?
Well done and I hope I still have a six.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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LoL yes, Lisa. Not necessarily intercourse but it's about a woman's body.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good presentation picture- filled with lots of visual presentations - crowned amber sky- curvy rolling hills- soft lush green grass- violet buds- moist fragrant caves- good job
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good presentation picture- filled with lots of visual presentations - crowned amber sky- curvy rolling hills- soft lush green grass- violet buds- moist fragrant caves- good job
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Ap
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis