My Wish
If I had one wish, it would be to be taller.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
So difficult to make hay of something so short, but your senryu hits a nerve spot on. That said though, I have a problem being 6'6" if I was to be made taller, I'd hit my head and if shorted I'd be a thick pancake.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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So difficult to make hay of something so short, but your senryu hits a nerve spot on. That said though, I have a problem being 6'6" if I was to be made taller, I'd hit my head and if shorted I'd be a thick pancake.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Wow, Tom. Good luck on airplanes. Thanks for the read and the response. Can you give me 6 inches?
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I feel your pain. I am tall and I still want that tape measure kept away from my midsection. The syllable count is accurate. The font is large and readable. The visual fit perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I feel your pain. I am tall and I still want that tape measure kept away from my midsection. The syllable count is accurate. The font is large and readable. The visual fit perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the read and the response.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
I wonder how many people have the same wish. People shorter than six feet usually weigh too much. I do appreciate your wording in this senryu. Good luck in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I wonder how many people have the same wish. People shorter than six feet usually weigh too much. I do appreciate your wording in this senryu. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Rod, for your read and response. Unfortunately I shortness is incurable, so I just tell people my brains are holding me down. Ha Ha :)