Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Together Again"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
28 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a poignant and achingly beautiful story. In 75 Words you have drawn the reader into a private moment and shared thoughts and emotions.
Sparkling elements:
-I am captivated by intimacy and love portrayed
-When the cellphone rang jolting you out of your thoughts and memories, the reader feels that with you as well.
Thanks for sharing this tender story.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a poignant and achingly beautiful story. In 75 Words you have drawn the reader into a private moment and shared thoughts and emotions.
Sparkling elements:
-I am captivated by intimacy and love portrayed
-When the cellphone rang jolting you out of your thoughts and memories, the reader feels that with you as well.
Thanks for sharing this tender story.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
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Thanks for taking the time to respond to me. I hope for better days for you and my sincerest wishes for complete recovery and good health.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Mine will be five years November 26, 2022. I know how you feel. Time does not heal. The day of the funeral has not left my memory. The scene constantly plays like a movie in my mind. It's as if the on button is depressed and stuck. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Mine will be five years November 26, 2022. I know how you feel. Time does not heal. The day of the funeral has not left my memory. The scene constantly plays like a movie in my mind. It's as if the on button is depressed and stuck. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
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It is sad hearing about losing loved ones. I understand. Thank you for sharing. I wish you well. You have my sincere thoughts. I wish there were words to ease the pain. May God bless you.
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Thank you for caring. I appreciate it very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a beautiful story telling the reader about the special moment you had with your husband.
How lucky you were to start most days this way, very special.
This is well written and presented, as it is a good contest entry that should do well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck!!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a beautiful story telling the reader about the special moment you had with your husband.
How lucky you were to start most days this way, very special.
This is well written and presented, as it is a good contest entry that should do well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck!!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
How wonderful that you have these times when your husband is with you again in spirit. But life does intrude and break the spell. This is a lovely story well-told in only 75 words. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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How wonderful that you have these times when your husband is with you again in spirit. But life does intrude and break the spell. This is a lovely story well-told in only 75 words. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your special way with words amazes me as much today as they have since the very first day I started reading your posts. You have your own way of seeing things and, I'm glad I get to see them that way too as you write. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Your special way with words amazes me as much today as they have since the very first day I started reading your posts. You have your own way of seeing things and, I'm glad I get to see them that way too as you write. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I always enjoy your peaceful and meditative descriptions at the beginning of your stories. This sounds like the perfect day to enjoy the moment and reflect on the love in your heart and the love surrounding you. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I always enjoy your peaceful and meditative descriptions at the beginning of your stories. This sounds like the perfect day to enjoy the moment and reflect on the love in your heart and the love surrounding you. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Lorraine. Your words always touch me just right!
My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Shirley McLain
Wonderful flash fiction, and it does touch the heart. You always do such a fine job with whatever you write. I wish you luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Wonderful flash fiction, and it does touch the heart. You always do such a fine job with whatever you write. I wish you luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I hate it when that happens, but it does every time.
I guess dreams just won't allow any close encounters
of the "intimate" kind. Well done. Lovely Picture!
Nancy:)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I hate it when that happens, but it does every time.
I guess dreams just won't allow any close encounters
of the "intimate" kind. Well done. Lovely Picture!
Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 75 Word flash fiction you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive and loving words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 75 Word flash fiction you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive and loving words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Fantastic flash fiction that actually rings true like a real moment of reverie and dreaming about a lost love that is interrupted by the crashing sound of reality--the cell phone. Well done. I really have missed reading your work.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Fantastic flash fiction that actually rings true like a real moment of reverie and dreaming about a lost love that is interrupted by the crashing sound of reality--the cell phone. Well done. I really have missed reading your work.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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In those quiet moments when I am alone, I tell myself how writing helps me soothe the wounds, but the strength to put words to paper just doesn't come...not yet, but I pray that it returns.
My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
