Doyen of Deceit
Another piece of Nonsense10 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Spot on. A home run. tater's all around. Frowns turned around. Your vernacular is yours alone. Your intro speaks volumes. Are we related? Writing nonsense comes easily to me and by the way I released one yesterday. "Feeling Crazy."
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Spot on. A home run. tater's all around. Frowns turned around. Your vernacular is yours alone. Your intro speaks volumes. Are we related? Writing nonsense comes easily to me and by the way I released one yesterday. "Feeling Crazy."
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Tom I just read your two most recent posts. You are one hell of a writer. I'm green with envy. And inspired. Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are true, upsetting, clear, descriptive and creative.
The poem made me smile. Yet I must say after looking up what doyen means - it is definitely the perfect title for this poem! It upsets he was our president and would even think of running again! The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes. This was a great account
of the current situation!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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The author's words are true, upsetting, clear, descriptive and creative.
The poem made me smile. Yet I must say after looking up what doyen means - it is definitely the perfect title for this poem! It upsets he was our president and would even think of running again! The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes. This was a great account
of the current situation!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I really expected to be flooded with abusive replies. Fortunately, to date that's not happened. In my view, an Aussie view at that, I see him as divisive, and I truly believe a country cannot progress forward without unity. I really mean it when I say God Bless America, but I'm just not sure if the Good Lord wants to be Donald's deputy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have no idea what Trump has done but he is certainly being hounded by those socialists who are a bunch of bullies! I fear for the future of America as freedom of speech has gone out of the window and the saying "land of the free" has a sour and bitter taste as people's liberty is being taken from them. I enjoyed your clever rhymes Bob and your humour here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I have no idea what Trump has done but he is certainly being hounded by those socialists who are a bunch of bullies! I fear for the future of America as freedom of speech has gone out of the window and the saying "land of the free" has a sour and bitter taste as people's liberty is being taken from them. I enjoyed your clever rhymes Bob and your humour here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I too have no idea what he's done, but what I fear is what he may do in the future. I'm not sure the man can be trusted
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The problem with Trump is that he would not take advice about his image and he was too loose with his words on twitter and people misread his true intentions. He wants the best for America, but he needs a good PR agent to get him back on track, love Dolly x
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent read, (being an Aussie) I just think it is hilarious watching his antics over the past few years, very well written and congratulations on your milestone post****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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What an excellent read, (being an Aussie) I just think it is hilarious watching his antics over the past few years, very well written and congratulations on your milestone post****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I'm not sure if it's funny or frightening. The thought of Donald having access to the button concerns me.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, you must be referring to Donald Trump, he's the the devil incarnate now, but I must admit I'm not a fan, some Christian folk thought that he was "God's man" but I didn't really believe that. But God chooses whom He chooses, even "vessels of wrath" this is a great post Bob, some yanks may not like it. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Oh yes, you must be referring to Donald Trump, he's the the devil incarnate now, but I must admit I'm not a fan, some Christian folk thought that he was "God's man" but I didn't really believe that. But God chooses whom He chooses, even "vessels of wrath" this is a great post Bob, some yanks may not like it. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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This is written with a degree of jest, but also with more skepticism. I fear for the world's future,
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Well done
Comment from LovnPeace
So Donnie's Being Looked At By The Good Old F B I
They undertook to make a search, with no explaining why
Been tipped off something's wrong, it's all being done by the book
Mr. President, it's time for you, to fess up that you're crook- you left out ab A===, Present president, at least this part is true.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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So Donnie's Being Looked At By The Good Old F B I
They undertook to make a search, with no explaining why
Been tipped off something's wrong, it's all being done by the book
Mr. President, it's time for you, to fess up that you're crook- you left out ab A===, Present president, at least this part is true.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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This is written in jest, but also in a moment of fear. I believe he has an impossible job, I just pray he's capable of making the right decision.
Comment from lancellot
Interesting. Aren't you living in Australia?
-Can't believe he expects to win, he must think we're insane
Mr. President, it's time for you, to fess up that you're [a]crook
- missing word
Now {there's rumours} running round
-there's a rumour
or
- there are rumours
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Interesting. Aren't you living in Australia?
-Can't believe he expects to win, he must think we're insane
Mr. President, it's time for you, to fess up that you're [a]crook
- missing word
Now {there's rumours} running round
-there's a rumour
or
- there are rumours
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. I have noted all your corrections, apologies, obviously I didn't proofread prior to posting. Yes, I do live in Australia, and I must admit our politicians also leave much to be desired.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A good work, political comment, anticipation, state of deceit is remarkably notified with a base of comment and political viewpoint and state in order of political manifestation and effect; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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A good work, political comment, anticipation, state of deceit is remarkably notified with a base of comment and political viewpoint and state in order of political manifestation and effect; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Alcreator, I applaud your final sentence. And I thank you for taking the time to review my work and awarding five stars
Comment from lyenochka
Loved it! Great job with your political satire and the alliterative "doyen of deceit!" It reminds me a bit of John Lithgow's poems on the same doyen of deceit.
Congratulations on the 500th post!
One suggestion:
old Donnie many lies (Donnie's)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Loved it! Great job with your political satire and the alliterative "doyen of deceit!" It reminds me a bit of John Lithgow's poems on the same doyen of deceit.
Congratulations on the 500th post!
One suggestion:
old Donnie many lies (Donnie's)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you for such a positive comment. I must confess I've not heard of John Lithgow. Where could I find his work.
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If you google him, you'd see all his clever political poems. You'd also recognize him as the actor in TV shows and movies. Blessings!
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, for my money, you got Donnie dead to rights. Unfortunately, there are a lot of Yanks who'll disagree with you. And those Yanks ... they are a vocal lot. I'm not afraid to tell you if they can't find a legal way to shackle him, and he gets the nomination, America may be in for one more scary run. Hmmmm, Robert ... no prose for your old buddy?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Well, for my money, you got Donnie dead to rights. Unfortunately, there are a lot of Yanks who'll disagree with you. And those Yanks ... they are a vocal lot. I'm not afraid to tell you if they can't find a legal way to shackle him, and he gets the nomination, America may be in for one more scary run. Hmmmm, Robert ... no prose for your old buddy?
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Prose is coming soon old buddy. I'm almost ready to start another.
Back to this, I'm rather disappointed, I didn't receive one comment of criticism. I really expected an avalanche of abuse. One doesn't attack the President.
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LOL, one of Trump's advisors confessed that the President was adamant about firing missiles into Mexico to stop drug trafficking. Few Americans are foolish enough to support the antics of that clown.
I'm so excited about your forthcoming novel. Will it be the same character at the helm?
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no, it's going to be something completely different. My lead characters will be a group of eccentric California singers named the J. S. Choirs.
