The Little Brat Rascal.
Teacher Miss Marsden and Spanky Haskel...2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem was well written. But this feels cut off. Maybe the "Seriously?!" is supposed to convey good news to the teacher based on the title of the poem. But I'm not sure. So I would suggest more detail to show the teachers true reaction (which could be in thought if you don't want it spoken out loud). Overall though excellent - this grabbed and held onto my interest.
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I thought your poem was well written. But this feels cut off. Maybe the "Seriously?!" is supposed to convey good news to the teacher based on the title of the poem. But I'm not sure. So I would suggest more detail to show the teachers true reaction (which could be in thought if you don't want it spoken out loud). Overall though excellent - this grabbed and held onto my interest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I can relate to this work, in my early years we moved every two years due to my father's job, no real time to make friends, or get real serious, very well done****kahpot
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Excellent, I can relate to this work, in my early years we moved every two years due to my father's job, no real time to make friends, or get real serious, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022