Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "A Sale of Souls"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
6 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
I like your wit. The photo is amazing: I would love to live in a house like this. I can imagine living there with about 6 rescue dogs, enjoying the Victorian style. (I only have room for one very verbal dog)
Too bad it's no longer lived in.
I like that you say the house was made into a home by a mother's hopes.
Good luck with this book.
Blessings, Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Author,
I like your wit. The photo is amazing: I would love to live in a house like this. I can imagine living there with about 6 rescue dogs, enjoying the Victorian style. (I only have room for one very verbal dog)
Too bad it's no longer lived in.
I like that you say the house was made into a home by a mother's hopes.
Good luck with this book.
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Cindy.
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You?re welcome, Bill.
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Comment from nomi338
Hey Bill, that was kinda' deep. As you spend a lot of time in the shallow part of the pool, hanging out with guys like me. Your dive into the deepest part of the writing pool has me a little bit frightened. Next thing you know, you will be inviting me to try it, and I don't know if I'm ready for it. Good job old buddy. (Emphasis on old.)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Hey Bill, that was kinda' deep. As you spend a lot of time in the shallow part of the pool, hanging out with guys like me. Your dive into the deepest part of the writing pool has me a little bit frightened. Next thing you know, you will be inviting me to try it, and I don't know if I'm ready for it. Good job old buddy. (Emphasis on old.)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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I was looking for a picture of my actual childhood home and confused it with the Munsters?.
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I can see and understand that. :))
Comment from BethShelby
Maybe your little flash is more obscure than my mind can grasp so early in the morning, but to me any house that becomes a home for whoever might live there, it takes on a soul. Times we've had to sell our house it has hurt like I was selling a part of myself. Homes seem to have souls.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Maybe your little flash is more obscure than my mind can grasp so early in the morning, but to me any house that becomes a home for whoever might live there, it takes on a soul. Times we've had to sell our house it has hurt like I was selling a part of myself. Homes seem to have souls.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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My nephew inherited our family home. He has no job so he?s selling it to the first offer. I was raised from birth in that house.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I guess in life, everything is temporary, and what may be one person's lifeling dream could be meaningless to another, or at least not match their chosen values. Many thanks for making me think :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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I guess in life, everything is temporary, and what may be one person's lifeling dream could be meaningless to another, or at least not match their chosen values. Many thanks for making me think :-)
Mike
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Mike
Comment from Raul1
I really like the home you have posted, and it is beautiful. A very good poem you have penned, my friend! Exceptional work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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I really like the home you have posted, and it is beautiful. A very good poem you have penned, my friend! Exceptional work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Raul
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You're welcome!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I really like this short little poem! It's unique, clever, and creative. I love that the title of the book is: Random Rhyme and Petty Prose. Very cute.
All the best,
Erika
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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I really like this short little poem! It's unique, clever, and creative. I love that the title of the book is: Random Rhyme and Petty Prose. Very cute.
All the best,
Erika
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Erika
