Every Curve
This I wrote for a friend12 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This almost sounds like it could be unrequited love of a man you only know his traits. But you say it is about a friend in the description.
I like the repetition for it enhances the emotion of the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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This almost sounds like it could be unrequited love of a man you only know his traits. But you say it is about a friend in the description.
I like the repetition for it enhances the emotion of the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're welcome;
Joan
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I guess his face sounds like a nice place to start and at least he isn't a stranger. Although, sometimes, getting to know a stranger doesn't come with all the typical baggage, or we don't know about it. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Well, I guess his face sounds like a nice place to start and at least he isn't a stranger. Although, sometimes, getting to know a stranger doesn't come with all the typical baggage, or we don't know about it. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Sorry for the copy/paste response Ric
?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from June Sargent
This lovely poem you wrote for a friend begs the question of just how well we know one another. We may not know someone by name - but instinctively know who they are and what they're thinking. I picture passengers on a train who commute day in and day out without ever actually speaking to each other. And yet they somehow have come to know one another...
I enjoyed this piece.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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This lovely poem you wrote for a friend begs the question of just how well we know one another. We may not know someone by name - but instinctively know who they are and what they're thinking. I picture passengers on a train who commute day in and day out without ever actually speaking to each other. And yet they somehow have come to know one another...
I enjoyed this piece.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I completely agree with everything you stated. Friends are just strangers we haven?t met yet :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Ulla
Hi Missy, this is an enticing poem, a poem I really liked. It wonderfully written by a little bit mysterious even. I simply loved the presentation. Good luck in the contest, dear friend. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Hi Missy, this is an enticing poem, a poem I really liked. It wonderfully written by a little bit mysterious even. I simply loved the presentation. Good luck in the contest, dear friend. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Ty Ulla. Your name in my reviews always mean I?ve done something right xx
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I have reviewed hundreds if not thousands of pieces and for whatever reason the style here is the first time, I can recall with a certain form familiar to me and yet unrecallable as to who writes that way. Are you acquainted with a writer with this rhymical style?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I have reviewed hundreds if not thousands of pieces and for whatever reason the style here is the first time, I can recall with a certain form familiar to me and yet unrecallable as to who writes that way. Are you acquainted with a writer with this rhymical style?
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I?m afraid not. I really didn?t know I had a style until I found Ekphrastic free verse. A friend here told me about it and I then realized how pictures speak to me. The author here was Mystic Angel.
Thank you for the lovely chat and review of my work.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Who is Mystic Angel?
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I don?t know her real name.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Missy, it more mysterious not to
have ever met...and yet know so much about
someone...just by the shape of their face...
their eyes...their lips...their smile...
how are you doing my sweet friend?...I hope
and pray all is going well...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture
with your poem in it...so very well written you...
Good Luck in the contest...God Bless...love you...
Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Hi Missy, it more mysterious not to
have ever met...and yet know so much about
someone...just by the shape of their face...
their eyes...their lips...their smile...
how are you doing my sweet friend?...I hope
and pray all is going well...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture
with your poem in it...so very well written you...
Good Luck in the contest...God Bless...love you...
Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Hi sweet lady? been dealing with some medical issues but I think everything is better now. Ty for asking.
Ty also for the bling xx
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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your so very welcome beautiful you...
your in my prayers...God Blessing...
and may He bring healing into your home...
love much...xxoo
Comment from Pantygynt
I get the feeling that you don't know him at all yet, but you will recognize him when you see him, or should I say if you see him. He sounds a bit too good to be true really, but I like the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I get the feeling that you don't know him at all yet, but you will recognize him when you see him, or should I say if you see him. He sounds a bit too good to be true really, but I like the poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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As usual you?re right. When we see with our hearts we miss all the flaws.
Blessing my sweet friend
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Fleedleflump
Your refrain stanza does a great job of keeping this anchored, and you use the pauses in between to fill in detail and help us understand the infatuation. Very well written - I enjoyed.
Mike
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Your refrain stanza does a great job of keeping this anchored, and you use the pauses in between to fill in detail and help us understand the infatuation. Very well written - I enjoyed.
Mike
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Hello there. Thank you for sharing a few moments of your time with me and leaving this lovely review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from karenina
Your original presentation, a poem written within art, is most impressive!
It (literally) frames your free verse and lends a deeper meaning, in my opinion. There is a kind of magic to knowing a person from his bearing, from the "curve of his face"-- the name falls away and becomes unnecessary. To admire from afar is a special journey!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Your original presentation, a poem written within art, is most impressive!
It (literally) frames your free verse and lends a deeper meaning, in my opinion. There is a kind of magic to knowing a person from his bearing, from the "curve of his face"-- the name falls away and becomes unnecessary. To admire from afar is a special journey!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Karenina. I always look forward for your reviews. Even if there?s corrections that need to be made, you are never harsh or belittling. :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Ty again
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I saw no corrections to be made here...simply loved the theme and presentation! Thank you, though!
Comment from royowen
How fascinating Missy, I love the way you've done, contained the artwork within the artwork, sort of like a shot out of a film like Casablanca, is incredible, well done my friend, great entry. Good luck, good to see you again, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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How fascinating Missy, I love the way you've done, contained the artwork within the artwork, sort of like a shot out of a film like Casablanca, is incredible, well done my friend, great entry. Good luck, good to see you again, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Hi my lovely friend. It?s wonderful of you to spend a tad bit of your valuable time with me this afternoon :)
Thank you, Roy
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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I?m happy to spend my ?precious? time gladly Missy. I wrote a poem on that very thing, fortunately God gave me more than a share, thank you. Roy
