"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work adumbrates reminiscences of parting wishes of the protagonist's dearly beloved departed ones.
The work highlights a rendition of a goodbye melody tinged with self satisfaction occasioned by an expended end. It further culminates in the semblance of a dance performed with dexterity on the safety laps of heaven.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with eternal restoration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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The objective correlative of your work adumbrates reminiscences of parting wishes of the protagonist's dearly beloved departed ones.
The work highlights a rendition of a goodbye melody tinged with self satisfaction occasioned by an expended end. It further culminates in the semblance of a dance performed with dexterity on the safety laps of heaven.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with eternal restoration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Why thank you Lloyd
And, of course this was written to show people there is life after death.
Yes, but life must also go on.
No matter the circumstances.
Not only fo me but also my son Jason.
Doctor Ricky
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Rhodesia
My deepest condolences, it must've been most difficult for you. I hope we all not sat goodbye to our loved ones and acquaintances, but only au revoir (till then). Carry on.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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My deepest condolences, it must've been most difficult for you. I hope we all not sat goodbye to our loved ones and acquaintances, but only au revoir (till then). Carry on.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Even though lond gone?
Three people would take you otherwise.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
