The Poem That Almost Was
I would imagine this has happened to you, too...3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Been there; done that. Then I went out and bought a mini-recorder, which failed as i couldn't find batteries. So I made notes, whenever I read a line from a published author or thought/think of something like yesterday's "No ill intent intended. ." There's a poem in there.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Been there; done that. Then I went out and bought a mini-recorder, which failed as i couldn't find batteries. So I made notes, whenever I read a line from a published author or thought/think of something like yesterday's "No ill intent intended. ." There's a poem in there.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thanks, yes, I know the feeling.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a No Restriction Poetry Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar Issues.
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Note: When I was reviewing this one.
It's almost like you've read my mind.
Yes, for I've known right along.
Right along, that when the message is pumping into our brains.
And, if we don't write it down immediately.
Yes, we'll lose it.
So, at least write down the title!
Thanks for sharing!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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This is a No Restriction Poetry Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar Issues.
...
Note: When I was reviewing this one.
It's almost like you've read my mind.
Yes, for I've known right along.
Right along, that when the message is pumping into our brains.
And, if we don't write it down immediately.
Yes, we'll lose it.
So, at least write down the title!
Thanks for sharing!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thanks for a great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We feel a great achievement when we write a poem and it turns out to be magical, I know that feeling and then you put it to the test and ask for other opinions, this is the hardest part because not everyone will enjoy our work, but we do try, much enjoyed, fine rhymes and sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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We feel a great achievement when we write a poem and it turns out to be magical, I know that feeling and then you put it to the test and ask for other opinions, this is the hardest part because not everyone will enjoy our work, but we do try, much enjoyed, fine rhymes and sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Hi, thanks for the review and kind words.