7-year-old Me
Looking a long way back28 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry to have missed this, Rhonda dear. We look to be the same age and have identical looking sisters! A wonderful word inside this one and shows your sweet trust in the Lord. Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Sorry to have missed this, Rhonda dear. We look to be the same age and have identical looking sisters! A wonderful word inside this one and shows your sweet trust in the Lord. Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Awww, thank you Sally. Your words are so sweet, and I?m glad you have a sister like mine!
Comment from jessizero
I like your thought of life as a dance where we keep step with God. You're right; it can get ugly. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I like your thought of life as a dance where we keep step with God. You're right; it can get ugly. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Jess, thank you so much for your compassionate review. You really got the point, and that is so encouraging.
Take care
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charmingly prophetic write smoothly and warmly presented, in complete compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this captured memory...
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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In my opinion, a charmingly prophetic write smoothly and warmly presented, in complete compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this captured memory...
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review, Eve. Your words are uplifting,
Take care
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You are very welcome indeed, and I am honored my words were uplifting...Eve
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You are very welcome indeed, and I am honored my words were uplifting...Eve
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, your poem does tell a truth. But, I don't see any ugly dance in the artwork. Faith will help us all through the hard times.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Yes, your poem does tell a truth. But, I don't see any ugly dance in the artwork. Faith will help us all through the hard times.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Joan, you?re right, there was no ugliness in the photo, but it did get that way, and I wanted sweet innocent, younger me, to know what to clung to.
Thank you so very much for the review, my friend.
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I understand.
You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are true, interesting, supportive, descriptive and
creative. I found words thought provoking and life can be really tough.
I liked the last line it is so meaningful and will help. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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The author's words are true, interesting, supportive, descriptive and
creative. I found words thought provoking and life can be really tough.
I liked the last line it is so meaningful and will help. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Harmony, for your harmonious review. How thoughtful.
Take care.
Comment from Michael Cassar
A poem with a great deal of hidden meaning. Many questions come to mind, especially around the well-chosen word "dance." We all try to dance; our skills and reactions turn our dance into a joyful or miserable experience. But never be afraid to dance again. Inspiring words!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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A poem with a great deal of hidden meaning. Many questions come to mind, especially around the well-chosen word "dance." We all try to dance; our skills and reactions turn our dance into a joyful or miserable experience. But never be afraid to dance again. Inspiring words!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Michael, you are so very insightful. The choice to the word, dance, was certainly not random, as well as the word "step" in the next line. Thank you for the advice on not being afraid to dance again!! You're the best!
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Joy to have our mind and words dancing in poetry
Comment from Fleedleflump
Indeed, in the dance of life, the tricking is finding the right partner. When you waltz with love and tango with temptation, who knows, perhaps you can Foxtrot your way into heaven. :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Indeed, in the dance of life, the tricking is finding the right partner. When you waltz with love and tango with temptation, who knows, perhaps you can Foxtrot your way into heaven. :-)
Mike
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Fleedle, you are so very humorous, I love it!! I definitely love to dance, as did my musician father who taught me. Waltz is definitely my favorite, so to do so with love is a great thought.
Take care
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this poem very much. It nicely captures the mood of the poem and capture the spirit of writing to your younger self with words of wisdom from their future self.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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I like this poem very much. It nicely captures the mood of the poem and capture the spirit of writing to your younger self with words of wisdom from their future self.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review, and kind words, Jake! I'm glad you took time to read it.
Comment from royowen
What a little cutie you were, you must have been a daddy's girl, you should've been if you weren't. Beautiful photo, very clear, a great entry in this poetry contest, and apt entry, well. Dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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What a little cutie you were, you must have been a daddy's girl, you should've been if you weren't. Beautiful photo, very clear, a great entry in this poetry contest, and apt entry, well. Dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Roy!! I did fancy myself a Daddy's Girl, good observation. I appreciate you!
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I?m sure you were, I had two girls, twice blessed
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Awww, so sweet, and a bundle of precious grandbabies to boot!
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Absolutely, more treasures
Comment from June Sargent
On our journey through life, we do need guidance - whether it be an old-fashioned map or a GPS these days. We do have the Holy Scriptures to light our way. And if we start relying on them at an early age, we develop respect and learn to walk in step with God. And hopefully stay on track! Lovely sentiments.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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On our journey through life, we do need guidance - whether it be an old-fashioned map or a GPS these days. We do have the Holy Scriptures to light our way. And if we start relying on them at an early age, we develop respect and learn to walk in step with God. And hopefully stay on track! Lovely sentiments.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing, June!! You absolutely captured the message in this poem. It would definitely be my message to young me, who still saw the world through the eyes of "Jesus Loves Me". He always did, but I think the dance got away from me a few times.
Thanks again!!