One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from kahpot
How beautiful though a bit sad for the homeless man, as we may view these scenes with the thought of going home, an excellent Senryu, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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How beautiful though a bit sad for the homeless man, as we may view these scenes with the thought of going home, an excellent Senryu, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and quite a sad statement of fact. Too many of us are homeless. It's often the forgotten sad reality in our country. Out of sight, out of mind I guess
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and quite a sad statement of fact. Too many of us are homeless. It's often the forgotten sad reality in our country. Out of sight, out of mind I guess
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". ? Novalis
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. Sometimes, the poorest of the poor enjoy the gifts bestowed upon us by God more than the average man. Gorgeous artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. Sometimes, the poorest of the poor enjoy the gifts bestowed upon us by God more than the average man. Gorgeous artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Margaret. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". ? Novalis
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done. The overall presentation is warm and inviting, and most everyone (so far) no matter how indigent can "afford" a front row seat to most glorious show of a sunset.
I enjoyed the gentle humour and warmth here very much.
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Very well done. The overall presentation is warm and inviting, and most everyone (so far) no matter how indigent can "afford" a front row seat to most glorious show of a sunset.
I enjoyed the gentle humour and warmth here very much.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Gloria. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". ? Novalis
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't understand Haikus or senryus, I ought to find out because I really thought this one was fabulous. What an amazing view the homeless person, laying his mat down would have, looking up at that incredible view. Even I wouldn't mind looking at that. Well done, Gypsy. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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I don't understand Haikus or senryus, I ought to find out because I really thought this one was fabulous. What an amazing view the homeless person, laying his mat down would have, looking up at that incredible view. Even I wouldn't mind looking at that. Well done, Gypsy. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Sandra. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem, even if you don't understand most haiku. You are very kind.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". ? Novalis
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really appreciate this write and often homeless people stay in the background, but this gentleman wants the best seat in the house, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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I really appreciate this write and often homeless people stay in the background, but this gentleman wants the best seat in the house, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Not enough can ever be said about a sunset. This is one of God's most cherished gifts to mankind. And it doesn't take being homeless to enjoy one. But a good viewing spot is a very good place for the homeless to locate themselves if need be.
Nicely worded.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Not enough can ever be said about a sunset. This is one of God's most cherished gifts to mankind. And it doesn't take being homeless to enjoy one. But a good viewing spot is a very good place for the homeless to locate themselves if need be.
Nicely worded.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from aryr
This once again was a great senryu and a rather priceless picture of the sunset, Gypsy. I loved your words that spoke of a homeless man having front row in this awesome sight. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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This once again was a great senryu and a rather priceless picture of the sunset, Gypsy. I loved your words that spoke of a homeless man having front row in this awesome sight. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs. (*÷*)
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You are so welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
It's priceless yet gratis for All ( including a homeless ) to see.
Sunset ( like sunrises) are emotional events. I get gloomy but those warm hues are beautiful.
It's one of God's many gift to us but lots don't bother to appreciate it.
I love to watch the sun go to sleep from the steps of our church which overlooks the town.
Take care .
Ciao!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Ciao poet!
It's priceless yet gratis for All ( including a homeless ) to see.
Sunset ( like sunrises) are emotional events. I get gloomy but those warm hues are beautiful.
It's one of God's many gift to us but lots don't bother to appreciate it.
I love to watch the sun go to sleep from the steps of our church which overlooks the town.
Take care .
Ciao!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
If not for that antenna getting in the way of that magic sunset in the image, then yes, priceless.
I guess when it comes to one of the things that makes my heart slow, my mind calm and the appreciation flow, I am really spoiled.
Where I live, we have some of the best sunsets on the entire East Coast of Oz. The bay in front of me, the river in front of that... surrounded by water. Most evenings, just before the sun goes down over the hills, I go out to the bench seat in front of my house, sip on my ginger tea and take in whatever colour/colours are going to grace my sight and senses. Not only do we have the sunset in the sky, but what it does to the change the appearance of the water is spectacular.
Do I love this? Throw in the the fact one doesn't need to have all the bells and whistles to hold the front seat of the best show in town. So that'd be a resounding-hard, yes!
You are a beautiful weaver of words Queen Gypsy. I love your mind at work.
With our thoughts we create...
the colour of contentment.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
If not for that antenna getting in the way of that magic sunset in the image, then yes, priceless.
I guess when it comes to one of the things that makes my heart slow, my mind calm and the appreciation flow, I am really spoiled.
Where I live, we have some of the best sunsets on the entire East Coast of Oz. The bay in front of me, the river in front of that... surrounded by water. Most evenings, just before the sun goes down over the hills, I go out to the bench seat in front of my house, sip on my ginger tea and take in whatever colour/colours are going to grace my sight and senses. Not only do we have the sunset in the sky, but what it does to the change the appearance of the water is spectacular.
Do I love this? Throw in the the fact one doesn't need to have all the bells and whistles to hold the front seat of the best show in town. So that'd be a resounding-hard, yes!
You are a beautiful weaver of words Queen Gypsy. I love your mind at work.
With our thoughts we create...
the colour of contentment.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, James for your time and exceptional review. I always appreciate your insightful feedback.
You are a lucky man, to live in paradise with your own beatiful and loving Eve. (*÷*)
"Weaver of words...wow, thank you, James.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis