Like Riding a Bike
This free verse poem is about an experience I had biking4 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Nice! Welcome to Fanstory! A high school student, yes? You impress! Fine free verse with excellent phrasing to engage all the senses.
I felt the warmth, I saw the sunlight through the branches, I heard the birds, the scent of summer air came wafting... I tasted the refreshing water...
You are in the right place...
Stay!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Nice! Welcome to Fanstory! A high school student, yes? You impress! Fine free verse with excellent phrasing to engage all the senses.
I felt the warmth, I saw the sunlight through the branches, I heard the birds, the scent of summer air came wafting... I tasted the refreshing water...
You are in the right place...
Stay!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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You earned them!
Believe in your talent...
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your story of your biking adventure. Your descriptions were well done. I can almost feel the sensations you describe. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your story of your biking adventure. Your descriptions were well done. I can almost feel the sensations you describe. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Congratulations on the milestone post. Good poem for the free verse contest. A very descriptive poem that put me in the seat of the bike as we struggled uphill, and then you pull the twist of coming back down in high gear. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on the milestone post. Good poem for the free verse contest. A very descriptive poem that put me in the seat of the bike as we struggled uphill, and then you pull the twist of coming back down in high gear. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Ramona Agin
An exhausting and exhilarating description of a bike ride. I felt like I was actually on the ride! Beautiful prose and flow. I don't know if this is for a contest but it gets my vote.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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An exhausting and exhilarating description of a bike ride. I felt like I was actually on the ride! Beautiful prose and flow. I don't know if this is for a contest but it gets my vote.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Wow, thank you so much for six stars! I'm really glad you liked it.
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Well deserved! Keep writing!
