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Jessica's Story

A story about my granddaughter.

37 total reviews 
Comment from Ann M
Exceptional
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Congratulations on your first post! Such a special relationship we have with our grandchildren...and it is our burden to, as my Mom told me, 'wear beige and shut up.' You did the right thing. Well-written and poignant.
Look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    Thank you Ann for your good advice along with your kind words. Thank you for the 6 stars. I can't wait to read some of your work.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Wow, this is an inspirational tale! I would have called this the circle of love. Such a beautiful message to give to your children and grandchildren that they are always loved just the way they are!
These lessons are well told and enjoyable to read. Learning from each other about grief and the afterlife is so important to us all.
Thank you for sharing this inspirational story!
Jesse

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
    Thank you Jesse for your kind words. I appreciate your support and encouragement. Sarah
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sarah., What an endearing true story. Jessica sounds like an endearing little girl. Her love for you is so great she wanted to come living with you so you wouldn't feel lonely.
I can understand you must be new to Fanstory as it is your first post. I wish you a warm welcome. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
    Thank you Ulla for your kind words. I appreciate your support and encouragement. I am a new member and looking forward to reading your work. Sarah
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Welcome to Fanstory. That is quite the start. All time best? who'd you pay? Are you a member of the C.E.C.? jk If I were you I'd stop here because you aren't going to have anything rated higher.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
    Thanks for your input Tom. I enjoy the interaction with other writers.
Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I was thoroughly charmed by your story for/about your granddaughter. I didn't see any blaring grammatical errors or anything. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
    Thank you jessizero for your kind words. I appreciate your help and support. I am anxious to read some of your work. Sarah
Comment from John Ciarmello
Exceptional
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I have to give you a six, Sarah. Not simply because it's your first post but because it's so beautiful and full of heartwarming times with your Grandaughter. You've handled being a grandparent so perfectly, and Jessica seems to be a best friend instead of a Granddaughter. I absolutely loved this! Best, JohnC. You're going to love this site

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
    Thank you John. I appreciate your kind words. I think I am so lucky to be in a group with lots of support and help. Sarah
Comment from jenintorre
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I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece about you and your grandaughter and can so relate to it as my grandaughter and I seem to be soul mates. Very uplifting. Thanks for sharing. Jen.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much for your kind words, Jen. I appreciate your help and support. Sarah
Comment from Annmuma
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I love this story and welcome to fanstory, Sarah. If you first post is an example of what you have to share with us, I'm looking forward to the next one.

Life happens as we make plans that are paper thin! My oldest granddaughter is named Jessica and she and I have a special bond. Indeed, I have a special and different bond with each of my five grandchildren. I think that is the way it works??

Keep sharing your life and reliving all the good times. Those memories are forever and cannot be taken away. Enjoy them every day while you make new ones to store away. Life is a challenge, an education, and wonderful.

Again, welcome. ann


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
    Thank you Ann for your kind words. I truly appreciate your help and support. Thank you for being my fan and encouraging me to share more memories.
Comment from Michaela Moore
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What a sweet and loving story about a special relationship. My favorite part is the walk and talk after your husband died, so precious and rings so true. I bet it was difficult having to tell her it was best for her to live at her home. What a blessing and a beautiful way to use writing to tell about you two.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
    Thank you Michaela for your kind words. Spending time with Jessica helped me heal. I appreciate your support.
Comment from MissMerri
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I loved so many things about this story. First of all, it was posted with a beautiful portrait of a darling little girl, and was completely free of typos or spag which makes the reading experience so much more enjoyable. Secondly, the story is sweet and full of love with a generous splash of wisdom thrown in. Thirdly, the story is told with great skill and charm. I could find no way to make it better. You may have my last six of the week. This story deserves it. MM

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much MissMerri, I appreciate your kind words. It is wonderful to belong to a writing group with great help and support. Sarah