One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
I love the metaphor squeezed into this tiny-little shell... crawls digging into my thoughts as I think of the parity between your subject matter and real life.
The clever construction in composition of word-play... caught in a moody tide,, and the sotori walking on seashells... as we do so often in life around situations or people who make us self conscious to our natural flow.
Yes, my Queen, Very clever and something that again has me staring into space in thought about what I've just read. You have a way of taking me into situations where what you write about relates.
It's a true talent!
With our thoughts we create...
safe environments.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
I love the metaphor squeezed into this tiny-little shell... crawls digging into my thoughts as I think of the parity between your subject matter and real life.
The clever construction in composition of word-play... caught in a moody tide,, and the sotori walking on seashells... as we do so often in life around situations or people who make us self conscious to our natural flow.
Yes, my Queen, Very clever and something that again has me staring into space in thought about what I've just read. You have a way of taking me into situations where what you write about relates.
It's a true talent!
With our thoughts we create...
safe environments.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, King James {*<>*}
It's always a pleasure to read your exceptional reviews, the six stars rating is icing on the cake, when it comes from you. You tend to understand my poems well. I'm happy you appreciate haiku and senryu. I love this kind of poetry. A good satori can take us places in our mind.
I like your quote, it's so true... with our thoughts we can be in turmoil or in peace, it's our choice.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". ? Novalis
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is just delightful, and clever. I enjoyed this tying "walking on seashells" with "walking on eggshells.
Very well done haiku.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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This is just delightful, and clever. I enjoyed this tying "walking on seashells" with "walking on eggshells.
Very well done haiku.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
A great haiku and an amazing picture of the hermit crab, Gypsy. I loved your words because they did show that beneath the ocean or sea the same words apply. Great job, well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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A great haiku and an amazing picture of the hermit crab, Gypsy. I loved your words because they did show that beneath the ocean or sea the same words apply. Great job, well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day. Blessed be, Aryr.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from karenina
I got the reference! Even before reading your author's notes! Perhaps because I have been walking on eggshells with certain people for years!!!
Clever, you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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I got the reference! Even before reading your author's notes! Perhaps because I have been walking on eggshells with certain people for years!!!
Clever, you!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day, karenina.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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You as well!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Yes, those tides are moody sometimes. I like your "walking on seashells" to resemble "walking on eggshells" which we do when we want to avoid setting a moody person off.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Lol! Yes, those tides are moody sometimes. I like your "walking on seashells" to resemble "walking on eggshells" which we do when we want to avoid setting a moody person off.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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LoL I have known a few people like that. Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.
MariVal xox
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem- delightful- good presentation picture- ties in with your notes about walking on eggshells- moody tide hermit crab walking on seashells - nice haiku
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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I like this poem- delightful- good presentation picture- ties in with your notes about walking on eggshells- moody tide hermit crab walking on seashells - nice haiku
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day, ap.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hermit crabs are the best! They are the ultimate shell stealers, lol. This is a perfect poem to showcase how they walk on shells. I love it, GBR. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Hermit crabs are the best! They are the ultimate shell stealers, lol. This is a perfect poem to showcase how they walk on shells. I love it, GBR. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis