The Solution
From the mouth of youth.34 total reviews
Comment from Faith Williams
Yes, as crazy as it sounds...
Flash fiction is hard to master, but you have managed to bring that story together in just 75 words! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Yes, as crazy as it sounds...
Flash fiction is hard to master, but you have managed to bring that story together in just 75 words! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading and your kind words. Hugs
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a good flash.
It is very hard to tell a complete story in only 75 words but you have done a nice job of it.
I liked the whimsical undertone as well as the topic, very relevant and relatable.
This is a perfect entry for the contest, I hope it does well.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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This is a good flash.
It is very hard to tell a complete story in only 75 words but you have done a nice job of it.
I liked the whimsical undertone as well as the topic, very relevant and relatable.
This is a perfect entry for the contest, I hope it does well.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
Comment from HarlanDrusky
Straight and to the point like all flash fiction. It's tough to convey a message in so few words but you've done a great job of it. Make sense.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Straight and to the point like all flash fiction. It's tough to convey a message in so few words but you've done a great job of it. Make sense.
Thanks.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. Hugs
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Prettybluebirds,
It's a nice piece of General Fiction 'as a Flash Fiction,' meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, CAPTIVATING flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and BEAUTIFULLY depicting the SOLUTION to 'the problem in Question!'
These words are particularly noteworthy: "That's easy, Dad, ...Them."
LAUDABLE in all respects!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Hello Prettybluebirds,
It's a nice piece of General Fiction 'as a Flash Fiction,' meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, CAPTIVATING flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and BEAUTIFULLY depicting the SOLUTION to 'the problem in Question!'
These words are particularly noteworthy: "That's easy, Dad, ...Them."
LAUDABLE in all respects!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you, and thanks for the six stars. I appreciate them. Let's hope it never takes anything that drastic. Hugs
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Pretty.., Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Just like in "Independence Day", it is the only solution. We must work on this problem locally in an effort to solve things globally.
A thought -provoking story in just 75 words. Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Just like in "Independence Day", it is the only solution. We must work on this problem locally in an effort to solve things globally.
A thought -provoking story in just 75 words. Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you. Let's just hope it never comes to anything so drastic. Hugs
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is an interesting thought. And it is possible it could work. It would give everyone a chance to forget about the world chaos we are going through. There needs to be something to get people's attention from not fighting and killing. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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This is an interesting thought. And it is possible it could work. It would give everyone a chance to forget about the world chaos we are going through. There needs to be something to get people's attention from not fighting and killing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you. Let's just hope it never comes to anything like this. Hugs.
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No, hope not. You are welcome.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Huh! What a great solution, and what a fun flash fiction. Now THAT was some clever thinking, both on the part of your character, and you too -- I'm still trying to come up with an idea for this contest. :)
Best of luck with your wee gem!!!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Huh! What a great solution, and what a fun flash fiction. Now THAT was some clever thinking, both on the part of your character, and you too -- I'm still trying to come up with an idea for this contest. :)
Best of luck with your wee gem!!!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you. All you need to do is think lie a kid to come up with something like this. Hugs.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Words of a sell-out movie. I see no other way myself. If the world does not have one common foe, then we will never have one common goal.
Very good thought.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Words of a sell-out movie. I see no other way myself. If the world does not have one common foe, then we will never have one common goal.
Very good thought.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you. I hope it doesn't take something this drastic to make the world see the light. Hugs.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your son has a point. It may take that before we ever work together again. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Your son has a point. It may take that before we ever work together again. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you. Your review means a lot to me. Hugs.
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, you have something here that all sides could agree upon. Excellent entry for this contest, good luck. These are indeed crazy times we live in. A round and round it goes. Very good work. Terry.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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LOL, you have something here that all sides could agree upon. Excellent entry for this contest, good luck. These are indeed crazy times we live in. A round and round it goes. Very good work. Terry.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you. Yep, let's hope it never comes to something like this. Hugs.
