Summer Tableau
A Rictameter7 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Dear poet, thank you for sharing your submission for the Rictameter poem contest. Your syllable count is spot on, and the message delivered is clear and concise, good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Dear poet, thank you for sharing your submission for the Rictameter poem contest. Your syllable count is spot on, and the message delivered is clear and concise, good luck!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, JLR, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
For anybody who has any level of belief, that sight, of Christ hanging on the cross, is one that will never leave their minds. His last words even included forgiveness for his persecutors. Truly he is the Lord.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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For anybody who has any level of belief, that sight, of Christ hanging on the cross, is one that will never leave their minds. His last words even included forgiveness for his persecutors. Truly he is the Lord.
Excellent.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Gary, for sharing my poem. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, you've done yourself proud here. The
imagery of the tree and
Christ on the cross is very
moving. My very best wishes
for the contest. Have a
creative weekend. ~
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Dear poet, you've done yourself proud here. The
imagery of the tree and
Christ on the cross is very
moving. My very best wishes
for the contest. Have a
creative weekend. ~
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your very kind praise, Regina.
Comment from TDLRasmar
A very beautiful poem that sees the beauty of nature and the reminders here and there of why we are blessed with such things of beauty. You did a nice job
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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A very beautiful poem that sees the beauty of nature and the reminders here and there of why we are blessed with such things of beauty. You did a nice job
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a well written poem. I like how you ended it with "I see". It's a powerful ending. But the poem overall was very descriptive and worked into the story of Christ naturally.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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This is a well written poem. I like how you ended it with "I see". It's a powerful ending. But the poem overall was very descriptive and worked into the story of Christ naturally.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Michael. Thank you for your kind praise.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic,
imagery and opening and closing lines.
-Good descriptive detail describing the tree.
-Very good closing lines showing what the old man
thought about after reflecting on the scene before him.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic,
imagery and opening and closing lines.
-Good descriptive detail describing the tree.
-Very good closing lines showing what the old man
thought about after reflecting on the scene before him.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Pam, for your insightful review and encouraging praise.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Rictameter you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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This is a very well written Rictameter you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Teri, for your praise of my Rictameter. I am delighted you enjoyed the descriptive words and imagery.
