My Road Through Life
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Comment from zanya
Beautiful sentiments expressed and the many and varied joys of living a long and fruitful life -sincerity of sentiment - thanks for sharing such precious thoughts with us readers
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Beautiful sentiments expressed and the many and varied joys of living a long and fruitful life -sincerity of sentiment - thanks for sharing such precious thoughts with us readers
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Jay,
We all wonder where our life will bring us in the end. It must be hard to see all your friends dying one by one. But, it is easier if you know you will see them again. We hope we will have a no regrets at the end.
Joan
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Jay,
We all wonder where our life will bring us in the end. It must be hard to see all your friends dying one by one. But, it is easier if you know you will see them again. We hope we will have a no regrets at the end.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You must have seen so many people come and go in your life and losing your friends is so very sad. Your poem is endearing and well rhymed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You must have seen so many people come and go in your life and losing your friends is so very sad. Your poem is endearing and well rhymed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from lyenochka
You're an inspiration, Jaybird. Most people don't have what it takes to think clearly enough to write poetry at 98. You are showing us that it can be done and we are grateful!
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You're an inspiration, Jaybird. Most people don't have what it takes to think clearly enough to write poetry at 98. You are showing us that it can be done and we are grateful!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You have lived, and continue to live, an amazing life.
I enjoyed your poem about your life. The rhymes worked
well, the flow was smooth, and your message was clear.
Your time on Earth has brought you both sadness and
happiness with many friends. Where and when that ends
no one knows.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You have lived, and continue to live, an amazing life.
I enjoyed your poem about your life. The rhymes worked
well, the flow was smooth, and your message was clear.
Your time on Earth has brought you both sadness and
happiness with many friends. Where and when that ends
no one knows.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Michaela Moore
Your poem is so touching. I wish I could sit with you over a coffee or tea and hear of your life's adventures and lessons learned. Humans are far too busy these days with such unimportant things. We need to sit with our elders more and shoot the breeze. I am glad you have writing as an outlet.
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Your poem is so touching. I wish I could sit with you over a coffee or tea and hear of your life's adventures and lessons learned. Humans are far too busy these days with such unimportant things. We need to sit with our elders more and shoot the breeze. I am glad you have writing as an outlet.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Joy, happiness, expectation, hope, love, all you feel and experience in the course of your journey of life and now there is the time of setting the sun, you go on for memories; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
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Joy, happiness, expectation, hope, love, all you feel and experience in the course of your journey of life and now there is the time of setting the sun, you go on for memories; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Mia Twysted
We will all wonder someday. You bring out such truths in your piece. I look forward to reading them and feeling inspired. Time is short but keep being true to yourself.
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We will all wonder someday. You bring out such truths in your piece. I look forward to reading them and feeling inspired. Time is short but keep being true to yourself.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
You have certainly lived through some interesting and sometimes perilous times my friend. Your journey has taken many twist and bends along the way and I'm happy that you have shared that journey with us.
Blessings
Janet
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You have certainly lived through some interesting and sometimes perilous times my friend. Your journey has taken many twist and bends along the way and I'm happy that you have shared that journey with us.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. You are such a talented poet. It's amazing at 98 you're still writing such beautiful poetry. You are such a blessing. I enjoy reading your poems.
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This is a beautifully written poem. You are such a talented poet. It's amazing at 98 you're still writing such beautiful poetry. You are such a blessing. I enjoy reading your poems.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
