Thoughts of Going Back to School
Grandson's humorous take on looking toward the School year41 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a pleasing Rictameter poem. However, I would have liked to be reminded in the note of the syllable count (I always forget). Also the title grated a bit. I feel it should be look forward to and that kids should be without the apostrophe. Good luck in the contest Kate xx
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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This is a pleasing Rictameter poem. However, I would have liked to be reminded in the note of the syllable count (I always forget). Also the title grated a bit. I feel it should be look forward to and that kids should be without the apostrophe. Good luck in the contest Kate xx
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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.Thanks Katherine for the precious feedback! You my first reviewer so thanks for suggestions.Also for awesome review! Not sure tho what you meant by grated. I thought titled was perfect trying to say what kids look forward to is vacation. Humor s what I was going for in poem and clicking on prompt always gives the syllable count. Thanks So much my friend!
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prompt - I know, but it's so tedious to do that repeatedly.
Grated = seemed grammatically wrong to me. For you to consider/check K
