Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Geez, this story is a real heartbreaker. I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading this chapter. I can't imagine how it would be to lose a father and mother both at once. Nicely written.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022

Aww... thank you, prettybluebirds :) I appreciate your honest feedback and was hoping to get some heartfelt emotions from this chapter. It was hard for me to write, but I had to do it. I was a bit worried I might offend some readers, but so far, it is turning out good. The good news is... things will get better for the boys.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from LovnPeace

Exceptional

What a heart wrenching story, yet charming at the same time. It is so true what mall things can bring joy to a child or child at heart. I was only five when my sis and i were put in an orphanage. Our parents weren't dead though. Loved your story. TG for kind people. Blessings, Barbara

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022

Thanks so much, Barbara :)
I appreciate the kind words and generous stars. It's always nice to hear encouraging feedback. By your heartfelt childhood experience, I can see how you relate to my character's story.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I'm afraid I'm crying with them, I imagined my grandchildren losing their parents, but they would still be safe with us. Such a sad note for this story, but you've shown that they will be well taken care, with people lining up to adopt them, they will be better off with John and Sarah, this is beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Went inside and (resigned) retired? Typo ; Jesus is His (son) too. Son? 2: God is a (father) to us all, Father?

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022

Thank you, dear friend :) I'm so glad you could feel the emotion in this chapter. That's exactly what I was hoping for. This one was hard to write. I was afraid to add the religion in this, but I believe we all need this in our stories. I have come to realize as a writer, you can't always please everyone and I want to write what is true to my heart. I have had some readers tell me that I should leave out religion in my novels. I think this world needs it. And I will continue to express my faith in my novels. I know you approve, my friend.
And thank you for catching the typos. I will definitely fix them.

I appreciate your support.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 03-Aug-2022

It?s part and parcel of this world, I think there are supposedly 700 million Christians. Are they ashamed of their faith? Good on you Shana, Jesus is proud of you.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

I know this is only a story, but my heart breaks for those little boys. You did an excellent job with this chapter and brought all the tear-jerking emotions into play. Have a wonderful afternoon/evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022

Thank you, Shirley :) My heart breaks too, and I'm the one writing this. But I promise, it gets better. Although Jace and Jem's life story is full of ups and downs, they also have a lot of good things in store for the future.
I appreciate your feedback and generous stars.

Sincerely,
Shana :)